rate_review Reviews

Okay I'll admit it, I am guilty of a couple of those M-preg plot holes *cough*suddenwomb*cough*

I have to say thank you so much for making fun of the 'combine Naruto and Sasuke to make their love child a name' cliche, gods it drives me completely up the wall when I see a spawn of Sasuke and Naruto called Nasuke or Saruto, mainly because neither is even a word in the Japanese language. This was a lovely way to poke fun at all of us who enjoy writing and reading M-preg fics, we do occasionally need someone to keep us grounded so thanks.

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

Lol. I quite enjoyed this little spoof. :D

Well personally I like anything with a good plot an I can't really say I have made such stories but still someone likes them. I have even written two mpregs and I can safely say that at least ONE does have solutions for the huge plot holes that you point out so I don't feel so bad after reading this. Or ashamed LOL. Nonetheless this was definitely a CRACK fic and I did laugh and I most certainly am curious about your association with a certain white substance LOL either way it was funny I enjoyed it even if I do enjoy MPREG. I thank you for the laughs and also for pointing out such flaws so the next time someone suckers me into another damn story I will take into consideration of such. And still so so SO glad I took care of those plot holes in my last MPREG. I guess its time to go bury my first PLOT HOLES A PLENTY OVER THERE!!! Do another story I want to continue wondering about your sanity. LOL I love it.

Oh My Fucking GAWD!!!! This is hilarious! It took me along time before I even OPENED a MPeg.... I just thought they were stupid as hell! But YOU! YOU made me wanna read them all if they're gonna be like this! Funny... TOO funny. My family's all kinds of mad cuz its like 11:30pm here and Im loud as hell cuz I cant stop laughing!!! TOO good. rolf I would love another chapter though... But only if you wanna. Man I love you! lmfao

Can't stop laughing....
Because that was down right hilarious. xD
I admit I write/read MPreg, but whatever. This was amusing as hell though.

That was the funniest thing I've read in a long time!! Great job...I'll be looking for the sequel too!

lol this story is funny so far!

LOL. This was a good spoof. Very blunt and to the point.

I'm currently in the middle of writing an mpreg fic, and I'm hoping beyond hope mine doesn't turn out overtly cliche but who knows, ne?

Thanks for the laughs! ^_^ ~ Jelp

*dies laughing* I think you managed to hit almost every stereotype I could think of. Every time I thought of one you might have missed, it would show up a sentence later. I've always been particularly annoyed by the 'Kyuubi is a girl' thing, simply because whenever I watch the anime, that 'vixen' sure has a deep, manly demonic voice, ne?

And trust me, as an author, it is your job to make stupid promises without thinking. As readers, it's our job to take advantage!

Dina

P.S. Thanks for your review! ^_^ Love you, too! (and Salty Cravings)