rate_review Reviews

This was very good and well written, I'm starting to question if you have the ability to write a story this 'is not' an excellent read. Thank you for being a writer.

This was absolutely glorious! Wonderful writing and flowing dialogue!

love it! Love your writing style, especially the very funny dialog. Your characterization of naruto is so perfect. Sasuke too: we couldn't see inside him at all (which of course is sasuke all over). But his behavior was dead-on (as in: yes, he's uptight, but that doesn't mean he gives a shit what anyone thinks!). I loved how they bickered and yelled. Even when sasuke finally came to ask Naruto out, he found a way to make him miserable-- but just briefly! (and I do love a writer who actually gives naruto the love he needs.)

Some strong mysteries remain hanging: who are these weird Uchihas? How did Sasuke get to be such a bastard? Yet, I like that: in a short story, as in life, we cannot learn everything as interesting characters pass through.

And briefly, since I'm supposed to critique, I will: with the correct pronunciation of Sasuke, the U is completely swallowed, so it doesn't seem likely anyone would shorten the name to S'uke. Also, (forgive me!) the last lines were just a little sorta sappy for my taste. We readers understood already, and the story perfect already, without the last lines.

Please keep writing this couple! You are wonderful and appreciated.

You definitely write the hottest, most amazing stories I have ever read in the Naruto fandom and I can't wait to read the rest of them. This story, just like your others, was, beautiful, intimate, and had amazing dialogue. You are just, overall, amazing.

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

"Naruto continued to read and pretended not to see the tears that fell from black eyes. He was glad when Sasuke returned the favor."

This was the saddest and most intimate line I have ever read. It had me balling my eyes out in a millisecond. I loved the plot, the descriptions and the meaningfulness behind every word said and written. The lemon was extremely hott yet at the same time very deep because of the flashbacks that were always coming up. I loved the sequence too btw.

I have definitely not read a story this well done in a VERY long while. Well...for the record I love all your stories.

Thank you. Thank you so much for writing something this amazing.

BEAUTIFUL

Thank you!

They have specific days for this? I've learn something new today. ~Marks both days on her calendar~ Are there days for other pairings? I need to do some research.

This story was beautiful. Seriously one of your best, if only because I didn't have to wait through an emotionally draining multichapter epic adventure. Much love and appreciation to you.

Hell yes, hell yes, hellyes hellyes hellyes. Gorgeous images and the pacing was damned near perfect.

Who cares about lateness when the story is as good as that one?
I'm addicted to your stories!

ahh, what a wonderful story. what I love most about the Naruto/Sasuke pairing is that its emotional capacity exceeds all the others, and you've definitely reached it! I was practically tearing. wonderful job. Stories like yours have me creeping into the Naru/Sasu/Naru fandom, which is a compliment, you can say, since I'm a dedicated Uchihacest fan. :3

I'll definitely check back July 10! haha.