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for Feeling the Heat

by lexjamandme

person Allys
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Like you need to "practice" your SasuNaru *smirks*, XD. *Glomps U* This was sooo... Emotional. It was really good. LOL, I remember thinking at the beginning that damn, this was one of the only times I wanted to make the smut move faster so I could get to the story! XD. I love the angle you took for this, and the way you developed the story. I love how you write angst, even though sometimes it still scares me, lol (I'm really wussy about some things - rape mainly, so this was great.) I really liked that they took it slow and you had the utmost consideration for Sasuke's condition. I knew a girl in highschool who had a similar problem and she took a long time to feel comfortable in her own skin again. It damn near broke my heart when I realised that Sasuke wanted to die and when he disappeared from the hospital. And Itachi was a scary guy throughout XD. LOL, I really enjoy your Itachi. I see you have an ItaSai out XD. That is a MUST!! I'm gonna try to get to it tonight, but gods I'm woefully behind on my stories. *sighs*, but now I'm catching up! XD.
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you really have a thing for calling naru 'angel' lol. great fic.

i never knew there was a narusasu day. does that make me a bad fangirl? lol
person hisoka
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
and itachi already likes him so theirs no meet the family kinda thing needed.sasukes only a complete bastard to everyone but itachi,hes a loving bastard to naruto.a good read,i think ive seen some others like this but their longer.i still liked this one
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story. I feel like you are healing my heart, one story at a time. Thank you for sharing your incredible talent with all of us.
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was such a wonderful fic!! I can't even tell you how great that was! The emotion, the personalities, the interplay between them. It was all so perfect! By the end it brought tears to my eyes! I loved it! Absolutely loved it!
person Danni
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you mix in plot with lemonade so well! It makes the story steller for everyone! and OMG it was steller...thank you!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story!!
it was so cute how Sasuke thought of Naruto as his angel!
i loved how you would cut in between parts
i'm looking foward to reading more of your upcoming stories
person gilliath
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this might just be one of the most beautiful pieces I've ever read. Amazing piece of fiction, I loved it
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. during mst of this fic i felt like crying. crying for the pain sasuke went threw and for the love and tenderness they both shared. it was great.
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story. I like the way you intercepted the building tension of the sex scene with their budding relationship. Very well done.

The only sad part is that there isn't any more...