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by sris

person moo
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my god i love this!!
is iruka going to leave kakashi?!
please please please write more soon!!
just so awesome!
person satterb
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Iruka!?!?!!! You asshole!!!! I can't believe he would do that! I thought he was confident in his sexuality. Is he going to keep his relationship with Otake a secret too or is that whom he wanted to keep his relationship with Kakashi a secret from? Anyway...I was thrilled to see this updated and as always you never fail to wow me!
person Anise
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(7) I'm amazed at how easily Kakashi gave up, Iruka did say he would think about it not that it was definite and already Kakashi's going into mourning. And the chapter started out so promising, such wonderful smut, well I suppose we'll have to wait and see-it was a great chapter though :)
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good to see this story still being written. :D
I like it. :D
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can empathize! I was just telling a friend how i can never keep a story light anymore...or ever for that matter. I guess some people are just better with angst and drama. You definitely are good with those. YAY though!!! Iruka finally came around. And damn if that smex scene wasn't nose bleed worthy i don't know what is. Gooooood chapter. I hope there isn't another big conflict but i assume there is. Will the other guy go to iruka and tell him he wants to be with him? Then Iruka will have to chose...but what kind of choice is that? Is there a person in the naruto verse that's better than kakashi...with the possible exception of itachi in the right circumstance...lol. anyway, great stuff.
Cheers
Meg
person aoh
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was hot, so damn hot *_* gods... i just love it when writer can really express the _joy_ of it, sucking and fingering, it so erotic!
person CkA
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice, original take on kaka-iru~!
person RyuEarth
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was incredible! XD
Thanks so much for the update! I loved it! ^^
person satterb
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit! That was beautiful! I'm so pleased that you're back. I hope you had a great holiday. I've missed this fic and I'm looking forward to the next update!
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!

now I have to tell you, you are a poet:)
the opening paragraph was beautiful.

and good for the boys.
I really liked the part with the gossip ladies at
the next table. Iruka had a "cause and effect" moment.