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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
u had quite a few typos. srry. it was good but also a bit rushed maybe u shuld get a editor 2 edit wht u typoed on
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I love these kinds of stories where the beginning starts off from canon manga settings. I loved it!
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
foremost, I thank you deeply dear! I love you!
I love your writing, this one-shot was steamy and erotic and I love the details and to have visualised them.
Often I had hoped for such scenes based on the manga chapters and I'm elated to have you bring them to life and to read them!
I'll be re-reading this many times!
Thank you so much
[laena]
I love your writing, this one-shot was steamy and erotic and I love the details and to have visualised them.
Often I had hoped for such scenes based on the manga chapters and I'm elated to have you bring them to life and to read them!
I'll be re-reading this many times!
Thank you so much
[laena]
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“I don't want to be killed as a virgin.” That line was great XD