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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just realised I haven't reviewed this story yet. I think I was suffering too extensive nosebleed after the first reading for my brain to function enough to write anything. But that was some capital smut. Loved the strong and self-confident Iruka. The way he lured Kakashi into his trap. Immensely pleasurable reading! Definitely one of the sexiest stories there is along with The Strangest Thing, which is totally in its own league.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this wins! Crazy hot sex! I love the way the two of them battle for dominance!
Write another one!
Write another one!
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that was amazing! You are amazing! Go Kakashi bondage and numerous bouts of hot anal sex! You totally win!!!
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fun fun fun. :D Iruka as Xena, omg, LOL. :D
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. That was awesome!!!
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn so so hot...... I'll get back after a second read and my mind has stop fizzling in showers of sparks.
many thanks.
many thanks.
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice Halloween story... Having Iruka's summon spiders is a unique touch. I hate spiders so hopeful you don't have them as Iruka's summons often.
Since the story was an unbeta'ed verison, I thought point out one potential flaw/confusion point I noticed in the story. You wrote "He grabbed a pair of uniform pants off the floor and raised his hands to teleport." Which lead me to believe that Kakashi put on the pair of pants. But later you wrote "Iruka smiled softly at Kakashi’s uncertain words while running his hands all over the older man’s naked body." Since there was no comment on the pants being dropped by Kakashi or removed by Iruka, which left me going "HUH???" Just thought I would share this observation (hope you are not offended as no harmful intent intended).
Hope you keep writting and posting stories because I will gladly read them. :)
Since the story was an unbeta'ed verison, I thought point out one potential flaw/confusion point I noticed in the story. You wrote "He grabbed a pair of uniform pants off the floor and raised his hands to teleport." Which lead me to believe that Kakashi put on the pair of pants. But later you wrote "Iruka smiled softly at Kakashi’s uncertain words while running his hands all over the older man’s naked body." Since there was no comment on the pants being dropped by Kakashi or removed by Iruka, which left me going "HUH???" Just thought I would share this observation (hope you are not offended as no harmful intent intended).
Hope you keep writting and posting stories because I will gladly read them. :)