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December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy fucking damn that was amazing. You are the angst queen and the bloody king. Maybe, just maybe, you want to write a follow up chapter/fic to this? Because it is amazing, so wonderfully written.
I'm reading through all your Fics right now by the way. And I have to say that I have fallen in love with your style of writing. I hope you continue to grace the world with yummy yummy man porn XD
I'm reading through all your Fics right now by the way. And I have to say that I have fallen in love with your style of writing. I hope you continue to grace the world with yummy yummy man porn XD
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please! please, for the love of everything smutty and hot write a sequel! I don't think you've exhausted the emotional and creative potential of this fic yet. I would really love to see Sasuke come to terms with what happened with his brother and their father or see Itachis reaction to becoming like his father and raping and kidnapping his little brother. I would really like to see how Sasuke would react in prolonged captivity with his brother and pein? Suicide? Love? Revenge? What would motivate him? I just feel like there is a whole host of possibilities in this fic that you could further explore and expand upon. Other then that this story was really well written, the grammer was excellent and the emotional responses in the story felt real. Its nice to see a well written and mature threesome fic involving a lesser known character like Pein. Excellent job.
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Plain ant simple
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey dearie
You know for the life of me I wanted to go into this one hating Sasuke, because I still haven't forgiven him or you for killing Naruto off in SEF! But while I ended up not hating Sasuke that doesn't mean that I didn't like the torture. This was freaking hot, between Sasuke, Pein and Itachi, I am not sure who I liked more in this. I loved how Sasuke was so wanton, the reason behind the killings, and the fact that when Pein and Sasuke came they screamed their respective lovers names.
Umm but whats up with the oneshot thing, is it really or is that a typo? How can you end it there, we didn't even get to see Pein pierce Sasuke's nipples so 'Tachi can play with them or give him a Prince Albert ;-)
You know for the life of me I wanted to go into this one hating Sasuke, because I still haven't forgiven him or you for killing Naruto off in SEF! But while I ended up not hating Sasuke that doesn't mean that I didn't like the torture. This was freaking hot, between Sasuke, Pein and Itachi, I am not sure who I liked more in this. I loved how Sasuke was so wanton, the reason behind the killings, and the fact that when Pein and Sasuke came they screamed their respective lovers names.
Umm but whats up with the oneshot thing, is it really or is that a typo? How can you end it there, we didn't even get to see Pein pierce Sasuke's nipples so 'Tachi can play with them or give him a Prince Albert ;-)
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG...what happens next?! This can't be a oneshot! I NEED TO KNOW!!!! *breaths*...please?...pwetty please?...*chibi-eyes* pwetty pwealse with a sexy ninja on top?...PLEASE!!!! *tears* TT~TT i gotta no!...anywho it was very scary...in a good way! keep up the good work...please?
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. Good start.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was briliant (hides knosebleed from coworkers), not a good story to read at work lol
as always hun your writing is just so great I envy you sooo much *pout*
as always hun your writing is just so great I envy you sooo much *pout*
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how sinister! Delicious >/w\<