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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love how you have made the characters grow so significantly and show so much of it in one chapter! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
-Parys
-Parys
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sounds cool
can't wait for the rest
just one thing, is Tsunade still in power as a Hokage aswell cos u said she was in her office earlier
can't wait for the rest
just one thing, is Tsunade still in power as a Hokage aswell cos u said she was in her office earlier
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just a reminder, constructive critisism is fine, I don't mind it at all. but telling me a small, one time typo and saying 'my paragraphs are too long' is not constructive or needed. please give me constructive critisim in the future.....(I miss Archfiend)
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great story and I'm all a tingle. Well it looks like Hinata-chan has picked up some of her husbands qualities.... GOOD FOR HER!!! I especially loved that little song she sang. I can't wait for Naruto to kick the crap/snot/sense or anything else out of Sas-guy-uke. I still can't believe how many people like that guy...Ugh! Keep up the great work and please lets see some adult "cuddling".
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's even better the second time! :)
~Ani
~Ani