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for Afraid of the Dark

by Jelp

person Eremi22
schedule November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure when this got updated, but I am definitely looking forward to the next update. Whenever it may be.
person moodysavage
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
geez this is such an awesome story. I love to read & reread your stories. Sasuke & Naruto are just everything to each other and I've loved those kinds of stories ever since I started reading as a kid. Too bad that's rarely seen in the real world.
person ladywolfTerri
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'll be honest, given the summery I was putting off reading this, thinking great, another vamp fic.. but OMFREAKINGGODS!.. WOW.... yeah, just wow. I need more... like now, like a crack addict going through withdrawl. lol. I sat down and spent the entire day doing nothing but reading this fic. Please, please tell me you are working on more!!! Okay, I'll be waiting and jonsing... and please don't let anything bad happen to them!!
person moodysavage
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapters 1-3...and I am so creeped out I had to check the locks and put a blanket on me so my feet aren't open... when I was a kid I couldn't let my feet or hands out from under the covers because of the monsters. And it's summer! It's too hot for a blanket but I don't care...I'm creeped out! (can't wait to read more!)
person moodysavage
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH!!! I love love love this story! After reading chapter 12 I had the song "I'm so excited...and I just can't hide it..." actually running through my head. And FINALLY Naruto puts Sasuke out of his misery in chapter 13. I just LOVE this story! Now I don't want to read anything else because I just want to think about this story. Jelp you are awesome. Thanks sooo much for all the time & effort you put in for readers who love your stories. Seriously...you ever compile your writings into a book I will buy it in a heartbeat. I already troll deviant art looking for pics that fit the image you give in the stories you write. Truly wonderful.
person Timber
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
SWEET!! :) I was so excited to see the latest update!! Happy Dance!! SQUEEL!!! I was like so worried when Sasuke left that they would be pulled apart from hard feelings over how to handle things between them. I was felt so bad for Sasuke and Naruto over the black light....poor Naruto was so excited then upset and Sasuke trying so hard to get him to realize how much he means to him. They have it so rough. I am so worried about the end though with Naruto telling Sasuke to not leave him.....this so has the ear marks of some storm ready to break over their heads!!! OH the WORRIE!!!
person Taka
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! that was awesome!!!!! omg i think naruto only did it cuz he didnt want to lose sasuke :( i hope that he did it for love too!
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking... "Hot damn!" Heh.

Keep up the great work!
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About time. Took you forever to update.
person Kat
schedule March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This is an excellent story that you should not abandon! I loved the legend and the magic and all the secrets and skills that boys are yet to discover. And their love. Aw.