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for Afraid of the Dark

by Jelp

schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay for the dress, and yay for the chapter, though it was a lil traumatic for the fans(and will prob get worse)
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this new story of yours! I can't wait to find out what's going on with the monsters and how Sasuke's and Naruto's families are involved with them.
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man you are good.i read the first chapter and got the chills.it reminds me of my childhood.keep up the good job!
person Tsuchi
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holeeeeeee crap. Last time I looked at this, it had one chapter, and I thought it was a death fic. And I was sad, and horrified, because I'd expected Naruto and Sasuke to be okay, and then they weren't.
And then I looked again, and there were 4 chapters, and I realized it couldn't have been a death fic, because you can't keep going when the main characters are dead. (Well, you can, but it means the main characters weren't the main characters after all; or ghosts. There's always ghosts.)
Nevertheless: holy freakin' crap! this is amazing! I love what you've done. I can't wait for more.
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're getting married? Congratulations!!! :D


Also, crazy chapter! I wonder just what Itachi is running from, and now would Naruto be in danger if those monsters can't come out into the light? Last I remember, school took place during the daylight hours. :P
Keep up the great work! ^^
person hisoka
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so does naruto not remember what happened when he was little?they were almost killed itachis crazy when hes scared but then again who isnt.cant wait for updates
person ladysessame82
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I really think the story has a great base to stand on, and i am intensely enjoying the suspense that is building up throughout it. please continue this and i will be the first one to review each and every chapter..
person ladysessame82
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I really think the story has a great base to stand on, and i am intensely enjoying the suspense that is building up throughout it. please continue this and i will be the first one to review each and every chapter..
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How?! HOW can you stop the chapter there!!

Evil, pure evil I say.

Fantastic and energized to the max. I loved this chapter because it definitely got the plot-ball rolling. What's Itachi planning is he crazy?! And Naruto and Sasuke still sharing the same room AND same bed is amazingly CUTE! Hopefully some smexy boy-love will happen soon!

Please please update soon :)
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this chapter makes you think a lil bit, about the "asking" business, and everything that's going on