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for Afraid of the Dark

by Jelp

person SamuraiSaaya
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh special powers!!

I should have known! That is SO COOL!

I am positively slobbering for the next chapter. You definitely have me excited. I can tell this story will be epic. Loved the chapter it really explained some things.

Can't wait for the time jump!! Please update soon ^^
person hisoka
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
itachis got some weird powers.did he alter narutos mind too?and what were mikoto and fukaku talking aobut.if narutos moms in a coma shouldnt he go and see her once in a while?hope you can update soon
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL

"Never ignore that feeling in your gut. Instinct keeps you alive when logic fails. ~ Jelp"

Each chapter comes with an important moral so that all may profit from its reading. Heh. ^^ Keep up the great work!
person Fayte
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Chapter 2! I actually thought that this was going to be a one shot!! Im so glad its not, That would crazy being hurt like that and not feeling paan. I am so glad Ibiki beleived Sasuke! Great chapter I'm off to read the third!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is amazingly brilliant! I was enthralled with every chapter, the burgeoning relationship between Sasuke and Naruto, and the cute way Sasuke was behaving were fantastic. I love the little hints about something more that Sasuke got while eavesdropping on his parents, and I love how Itachi still has powers similar to canon. I can't wait to read more here :D
person Fayte
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww I wanna read the next chapter!!! Really good dtory I can't wait to see how it all unfolds!!
person Ash Asylum
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!

I have so many theories that I feel will be answer soon, so I won't say any for them to get ruined...

Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Dragon7
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting chapter!
i'm so curious right now. my mind hurts so bad just thinking about what his parents were talking about.
why did Itachi have to make them forget everything? Sheesh it's better for them to know and watch out for themselves
oh god, you so have to update real real soon pwease!! ^_^
and i'm totally adding this story to my recomended reading!
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting buildup you got in this fic