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im pretty shocked that mikoto would hit a child,at first i thouth the first chapter would be the end and sasuke and naruto would be dead.i understand the fears of night and dark when i was little i slept in my brothers room(he had a bunk bed and i liked the top)and afraid of monsters i didnt leave the bed to go to the bathroom,i dont think you could call it an acident because after wards i could only get to sleep thinking how funny it would be if my matress dripped onto my brother.yeah i was an odd child.hope you can update soon

Oh no! The ending sentences were definitely foreboding and ominous. I'm actually a tad scared! This chapter is a true breath-stealer. I'm wondering what Ibiki's role in all of this is. He doesn't want Sasuke to tell his parents? Weird. Poor Naruto too, I can't believe he got hit my Sasuke's mom!

The suspense is killing me, please please update soon :)

I'm really enjoying this, I cant wait for the next chapter.
I had a different opinion about the darkness as a kid. I was never scared of the dark, only the half light. My theory was, if it was dark, then monsters couldn't see you. If you had light on yourself, it was like a spotlight saying, here I am, come and take me.

Okay, you've got me dying of curiosity, now! I've got so many questions I can't even think to articulate one! Just please continue! I want to know what happens!

As always, you're an excellent writer; I hope you never quit!

*glomps Jelp* OMG I love this story, how do you always manage to draw me in and get me hooked on your stories?

I'm very interested in how this story is going to progress and how incubi (or not) will be involed. Sounds like you have the plot mapped out and are stringing the reader along for now. At times I think Sasuke's 6 year-old mind is a little exaggerated, but overall it works. Once again, I'm looking forward to the story's progression, and hope you update soon.

Oh, sorry about my confusion earlier. Now, I get it.
Of course they could still be alive but just bloody, but no, I had to think of it as if they were dead. I'm such a weirdo.. ;P
Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter and I think the fic is really cute as well as original and exciting. So keep up with the good work!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs

Poor Naruto, getting hit when he was already hurt. Ibiki is cool as a shrink. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to the next chapter.

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

Ooh, the Uchihas know something about Naruto...or his parents. And how and why can Naruto protect Sasuke, even if he's a survivor and the monsters couldn't have killed him? I've been intrigued by the story from the first chapter, the second one just got me addicted. You write about child's logic so well! I can't recollect how my mind worked when I was six, but I guess it was terribly similar (having a raven and a black yak as imaginary friends and whatnot..)

Well, have fun writing next chapters! I will be needing some insanity fix, since my Tourism exams are coming.. :)