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for Afraid of the Dark

by Jelp

schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story i'm so hooked!!
why did Ibiki say for him to keep it a secret?
i'm really curious to find out what happens next,
god please update real soon!!!
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! So does the doctor really believe in monsters? It's strange but I love the mystery! :)
person DARKON
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HI! I read the first chapter on y!gallery. I really liked it. It had me on the edge of my seat. I was browsing at aff.net when I saw AFRAID OF THE DARK with chapter two.

At first I was afraid that Sasuke & Naruto had been attacked during the night. I was concerned that Naruto had been injured when he met Sasuke. This story is getting very interesting.

My guess , from the reaction of Ibbki, the 'monsters' are genetic experiments that escaped.

Keep up the good work & update soon.

DARKON
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol i had the same fear when i was 4 about flushing and a monster coming out of nowhere! I did have the thought of not flushing, but then i would get yelled at by my mom and dad 4 not flushing, so i ended up having to do it anyway -.- .... But ur story so far is great! I havent been this hooked on one of ur stories since i read 'Mine' and im really looking forward to an update *hint :) hint* lol. But Im stuck wondering how blood got all over them ??????? wouldnt sasuke have seen the blood if it was from the night b4??? and if they were hurt during the night wouldnt they have woken up??? U know I hate cliffys they always drive me crazy >.< .... sigh.... oh well I guess I just have to beg and plead now then... PLEASSSSEEEEE update soon!
person gabby
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, so u got me hooked up on your pretty story, let's not forget NARUSASU story(additional thankyou's for that ;), and now i wanna know what happens next... so don't torture me and plz update as soon as u can.. ok? tons of gratitude ! :* ja ne!
person samuraiSaaya
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM


You don't even understand how excited I am to read this story. You have put me on the edge of my seat literally starving for more. The creativity, the plot and the cliffie make me soooo anxious. I love the effort and thinking you put into the plot and the idea is ingenius. I can actually picture a young Sasuke being afraid of monsters. Also the steady undercurrent of fear in the chapter made my skin tingle and made me want to turn my head to look behind me a few times. Loved it, absolutely loved it. I'm CRAVING for the next chapter.

Please please update soon :)
person silverfox
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far! The reasoning is comical!!! I adore it. And "A part of him wondered if the monster only came out at night after he had flushed the toilet." Line? Hahaahhaa! I laughed so hard I woke up my sister! ^_^ I wonder where the blood came from? Is Naruto a vampire and sucked Sasuke's blood in the middle of the night? What happened to his mama? O.O Please update soon. >.> The darkness lingers o.o
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love what you have so far, as always your story writing sucks me in, when i see one of yours I always read it because I know it will be a good one!

Can't wait to see how this turns out :D
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eh?!! How could there be a continuation of this if they're both dead? *confused*
Unless they became vampires? Or something else?
I really liked/like the fic, I thought it was fluffy and cute, and then you finish the chapter with that! huh?!
I'd like to see how this will develope because I'm confused as hell, maybe they didn't die, maybe they were just bloody, I don't know...now you made me all curious to read the next chapter. So hopefully update soon.
Good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Adorable!!! Simply adorable!!!! I love it!! +^^+

I never had a night light. Although I would jump on to my bed in the dark rather than walk up to the edge. You never know what might grab your feet from below in the dark! O_O