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Chap. 12

I really enjoy how this story and the characters are developing. I found the creepy spider thing really CREEPY!!! SHIVER!!! Sends chills up my spine just thinging about something like that. I know spiders are good for killing bugs and flies but is it just me or do they seem to be in larger numbers around the house this year then they normally are?? I don't recall ever seeing as many as I have this year in the house and kinds I've never run across before. UGH.....makes me think the idea of bug spray for spiders just might be a good idea! LOL

I can't wait to see what happens next!! :)

This story has me enthralled! Very imaginative. I do hope you update one day. This story is so interesting. Email me if you update.

This is amazing! Your ideas and the way you handle the characters are so original that there hasn't been a single dull moment. The minute that I think I've got soemthing figured out--because of what sterotypically happens next--you work your magic and I'm blown away by the new direction.

Oh my god, Jelp. That Daoshi thing has got to be the scariest concept for a monster I have ever come across. A creepy spider thing that is extra spindly and sneaks down from the ceiling with its webbing while you sleep and pluck out your eyes??!!! Never in all my life have I ever even conceived of a nightmare that terrifying!!!

If this thing haunts my dreams tonight I swear I will hunt you down and kill you. ((o_o))


Keep up the good work, you terrible, terrible woman. >:o

There's a perfect moment in this story where all the characters come into the room from the hallway...it's just so reminiscent of the actual series's humor that makes this fanfic so relatable and likeable! You're a fantastic writer, keep it up!

Time jump! Awwww yeeeeah! I don't remember if I ever reviewed this story or not, but I loves it so. The pacing of their development is great. And Kakashi's intro? Also loved. His interaction with everyone, and then Naruto's 'you're like a genie!!' thing was adorable. And poooor Sasuke XD! And poor Itachi's jaw XD (And is it bad that after reading that Itachi has business to attend to my mind went to 'mythical things, canon Itachi does what... does that mean he's going to meet Kisame the worlds worst and most inappropriate little mermaid or siren and pal around...!?'... and now I regret it cause Kisame half naked and grinning, singing sailors out to sea to die with that rattling giggle voice is horrible thoughts).

But I can't wait for the time jump. Mmm, development. And then maybe Sasuke won't feel like such a waffle. And be the sparkling happy fairy Naruto believes he can be... :|.

I love this story. Even after some time from the last chapter, I remember everything that happened. It's so good it stays in your mind and I keep looking for it in the updates.

Thanks for the great New Year's gift to all your readers Jelp!!! I love this story and I go to your sites at ygal ff and aff almost weekly...okay more like daily just to check on updates and what not so...yeah thanks for updating one of my favorite stories...Happy New Year!!

Like always a wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see what's in store for the boys next. I can't get enough of this story! You've really outdone yourself with this one.

Afraid of the Dark Chap. 1

Oh my gosh!! This is just so cute and adorable!! I just love the whole theme and the details. I think you really got across just how scary it is for kids that are afraid of the dark. I so was one of those kids to when I was young. As an adult that was afread of the dark as a kid I so was more sympathetic when my kids had fears and so did not try to brush it off like some adults do. Kids have fears and they need the parents to go through and show them the closets are empty and the space under the bed is too full of toys for any monster to fit.(Thats what I used to show my kids when they were little. It helps them alot.) So I am so looking forward to the rest of this story!!! :)