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Just the Beginning Chap 2

So excited at this turn of events and looking forward to what happens next. :) I am worried about what Naruto said before though....of if Sasuke was still Sasuke....I have a bad feeling it stands for more then Sasuke realizes and will be very scary!!! Love a good scary story!!! SHIVER!!!

I so agree with what you wrote here...

Never ignore that feeling in your gut. Instinct keeps you alive when logic fails. ~ Jelp


When ever I ignore my gut feeling it ALWAYS leads to some misfortune or trouble in my life that would have been better to have advoided!!

I really am enjoying this story. Different from what i've read before. I like it a lot. I wanna know what happens! : D

Jelp I must confess that you are responsible for many of my sleepless nights..I have to admit that I have read every single one of your stories in one freaking sitting(yes just one) because they are that good...I look up at the clock on my computer screen or my cell phone (I read them on my cell too) and will be like 3:00 am and I'm like damn 15 more minutes until the Welcome to our daily down time...blah blah...and then I have to give it up until the next day...Thank you for sharing your creativity and amazing writing talent with all of us here on AFF and FF and..you and so many other's have made the last 10 months so enjoyable for me...(10 months is about how long I've been aware of this whole AFF and FF naruto fandom) I always get so giddy when I see your penname or the name of another of the authors in your close author family..like darkabino's or michelerene's.

Again Thank you for another chappie for this story...waiting patiently..for the next instalment of any and all of your works.
A sincere fan,
Patty

Awesome. Yes. More please. :P

Love the tension in Sasuke and Naruto's relationship and the uncertainty about their feelings. Makes for a much more interesting plot than if they just got together easily. Can't wait for the next chapter~

Okay, so I was reading this. And I didn't realize that it was Jelp-san writing this. And I thought to myself, "You know, this writer feels a lot like Jelp-san. I mean, she really paints a vivid picture of what is going on. And Mikoto's story? Fucking riveting." Then I go to the next chapter and glance at the author's name for future reference... And it's Jelp-san. *major sweatdrop moment*

So yeah, this was pretty damn awesome and I like your take on hidden villages and the destruction Kyuubi caused. Hopefully (hopefullhopefullyhopefully) there will be another update soon because I am addicted to your stories like they're crack.

Much Much Love.

I was very surprised at how this story has been going and couldn't even stop myself once I started! I actually started last night and was scared to look out my blinds for fear of trolls. I'm 25 years old. ): . My Gods, I need more! I'll be stubbornly checking back for new chapters each night! Continue making it long and fulfilling. It feels like I've barely scratched the surface on this story and I hope that's the truth! You rekindled the flame on what I thought was a lost interest in "unique" and alternative story lines. I hope to see more!

Oh ..
Like Jiraya, but hell, I always do that :P
Loving Itachi :D
Angry at Fugaku, but had sort of seen it comming..
I'm really curious as to what the thing with the touch means!
I'm worried for Sasuke and Naruto, I hope they end up at the same conclusion, that be either friends or lovers.

Looking forward for the next chapter!

Oh shit!! Surprise sex scene!!! lol

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Keep up the great work!

This is a fantastic story so far. I almost wish that you could have made this into a novel and then had a director make it into a movie cause its so awesome. I like where the plot is going and hope to read more soon.

Best Wishes,

V. Siren