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for Afraid of the Dark

by Jelp

person Mayab
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Awesome chapter! And story. And everything. Can't wait for an update.
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is great, you had (and have :D) wonderful idea with it! I'm waiting for another chapter, so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! :)
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When i realized that this was the last chapter - FOR NOW(!! shakes fist) - I just screamed out loud "NOO!"
GOD, I love this story! You need need need(!) to continue, and fast!
The deductions-skills of kids is to so cute and entertaining to read about XD.
It's very exciting, and I'm officially incaptured.
That was such an evil place to stop! Are Sasuke and Naruto mated or something? :o
I really look forward to the next chapter, and I wish you good health!
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely OBSESSED with this story. It is seriously my favorite NaruSasuNaru/SasuNaruSasu story I have EVER read and I have read several. I love the fact that this story isn't flat out porn and how it has an amazing plot line that draws a reader in. It is so creative too, the plot is unlike anything I have ever read before and when I found out Sasuke (and Naruto to an extent) were fairies I had to do a double take. It was so unexpected yet it fit perfectly. Both your writing style and content are ingenious. I am looking so forward to your next update!!!
person IvvyMoon
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah ha! I have finally had the time and ability to get on the computer! (My computer at home is having serious, serious issues) I'm so glad you updated! And the fact that we're FINALLY going to find out about the black light next chapter is so freaking exciting! Yeah, Jelp!
schedule May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AH! You've updated! Yeah! And it was a great chapter, full of more truths and more suspicion and even more secrets. I loved it. I'm eager to see more, especially what has happpened to Sasuke's father and how his mother and brother are. Also, I want to know if Naruto's Dad is still alive, and if he is, where he's been at all this time. Please update soon!
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story has me totally hooked. You've littered it with enough folklore and mythology to give it a mysitical feel, but managed to keep it grounded in reality. It's like a modern version of a Grimms Fairy Tale - uncensored, un-Disney'ed, and totally addictive.
person hisoka
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
theyll never get away from the blacklight,sometimes i wonder about narutos sanity who would willingy go with the guy who was promised you?thats just something i dont get most would rather run or something not thin 'hey he could train me better'what about what jaraiya said about suicide.some people just dont have any mental sence at all.hope you can update soon
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whatever. I'm just glad you're still updating. :)

Keep up the great work!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooo! You just touched onto the subject of the black light! I'm very very excited to hear more.

Please please update soon ^^