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for Afraid of the Dark

by Jelp

person Kimra
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next update! :D
person ZeroZoey
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Very happy you updated, it has been awhile. Well the chapter was great please please update soon
person Kamren
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! I try to tell myself to wait until an authoress has completed the fic before reading it... but it's too GOOD! I appreciate that you update at all seeing as how fanfics don't pay the bills but please please please update soon??? XDDD
person Gabby
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely as always, still caught up and waiting for an update! :)
person Kuu
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im intrigued. Let's throw those two into a room full of black lights and see what happens...

:E
person kuu
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Crazy!! Haha, this is very interesting and entertaining! I haven't read a fic in quite some time, and I must say, I'm glad I stumbled on to this one first. I love how cute they are, you portrayed their kiddish personalities wonderfully.... Because all that "5 and a half, not just 5" type of stuff, comparing ages and what not is soo true. lol. Good job, ill continue to read. :)
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! So exciting ^^

I'm glad that there's finally some help for Sasuke and Naruto! Or is there?

No sexual attraction?! Well thats gotta be fixed...

Please please update soon :)
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I like the conflict between Jiraiya and Kyuubi. I wonder what the agenda of each is? :P

Keep up the good work. (And if you don't update in time, Happy Birthday!)
person luckydog
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Oh my god keep up the suspenceful work!!! WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!????
person hisoka
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
those wings seem odd,i see them covered in sorta like flesh yaho vainy and all but i guess thats more masculine and better than the butterfly wings.weres sasukes father still with itachi?what can they do now at school being chased by freaky looking black things(i always imagine they look like those things from kingdom hearts)mikotos stories just make me confused a bit but i guess it helps.hope you can update soon