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for Afraid of the Dark

by Jelp

schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved Naruto's reaction to the flying.

And yay for the update!! really good chapter. sound fairies! will that tie in with Orochimaru, somehow? I wonder...


schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I'm really interested in what you conceal and reveal about their pasts together, as if its always been there but always been hidden. I wonder what Naruto's skills will be, and whether the black light caused their trist, or if it was something else.

Great work at keeping the mystery going.
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One could only imagine what sort of loopy stuff you'd end up writing on pain pills. It could be pure jibberish or quite possibly the most weirdly brilliant thing ever! (Or, more likely, two or three words, followed by a "laihflgbasegjagasasseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasa..." and a whole lotta drool! hehe)


Keep up the great work and good luck with the surgery!
person Angel
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Good luck tomorrow with your treatment sweets and thanks for thinking of us minions to post early! The bestest of thoughts your way for a speedy and a successful treatment this time around!

It's so harrowing reading about the U freaking great genuiuses HA! aka UCHIHA because I have the tendency to second guess every move they make and accept every word they speak with a grain of salt lol. You are building and building tension (shikes, gathering chakra for that rasengan eh! oh my lunacy!) anyhow ... it's frustrating aarrrgghh because I want to know I want to know I want to know NOW!!!

I loved the interaction between Naruto the contemplative experimenting IDIOT and Sasuke the moody idiotic genius in the room, and lo, what is this with a black light eh and why does the purple keep breaking? Hmmm purple - denotes pending death, royalty, what else, what else, what am I missing here? :)

Well you don't drop ball on surprises and keeping the momentum going!
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I Love this fic so much! I can't wait for Naruto to remember!
Sooooo..... I guess the black light has some sort of Bow Chika Bow Wow effect! COOL!
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Totally getting to the action! I really hope Mikoto is okay :(

And I'm especially curious as to what happened with the black light.

Hope you recover as healthy and happy as possible :)
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am a bad little fangirl. I hadn't read this before. I don't know, I thought it would be too scary or I don't know...
But once again you have proven that whatever you write I MUST stop everything and read. Dear god, I love this. LOVE it. I'm on the edge of my seat. As always your writing is phenomenal on every level, characterization, description, intensity... everything.
I am actually a little angry at myself because although I still have one more chapter to read, you can expect another review then... I kept forgetting to review the previous chapters because I wanted to get to the next... I almost wish I had waited until it was complete because now I'm going to be checking everyday for an update... I might die... and here I thought waiting for updates for "Highs and Low" was going to kill me... oh my god, and "Naruto, You aren't pregnant." Seriously, I apologize to your fiance, but you can't do anything else but write. Sorry... I need you to only sit in front of your computer...
I'm not above bribing. You tell me and I'll do it.
Oh, and this line was PRICELESS...

"The only way Sasuke and Itachi are fairies is if the universe is trying to balance things out by counter-acting all the happy-cutesy-girly-stuff with these two angsty-emo men. There’s no way that they’re fairies."

LOVED IT.
Michele
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH GOOD LORD!
And now I feel like an ass... I was just joking about ignoring your fiance... I am so sorry about his aunt.

God, I feel stupid now.
So stupid that I want to go hide. It was a unbelieveable chapter. Unbelieveable.
*runs off to pull my stinky foot from my mouth*
person TurnYourTearsToRoses
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke and his wings ;) I was hoping someone would put that in one of thier stories soon. Thank goodness it was you, because it FITS!!!!!!
person TurnYourTearsToRoses
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Totalllyyyy wicked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!