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well after readnig 5&6th chapters i was absolutely chought up in your story, it was something incredible, magical, hypnotic that i couldn't take my eyes away from monitor not until last letters of your note at the end of the chapter... i really enjoyed the story, moreover i'll be waiting for your update ^_^. of course i was taken aback when Mikoto took the cat out of the bag XD... it was quite a surprise that Sasuke could be a fairy:D and i think you have done great job by connecting your story with that legend. it perfectly goes together!i am so hooked up on your story now.... thanks for sharing such a masterpiece with us (hug&kiss on the cheek)

Fantastic story. I really liked the fairy tale - enough of a real old story to be convincing, and tied nicely into the plot for Naruto and Sasuke.

Personally, I love the fairy tale aspect you added into the story. The story of Naruto itself is embedded with so much Japanese myth and lore as it is that its cool to see it given a chinese twist. (I once took a Chinese literature class in college and it was filled with complicated myths like that. ^^ I enjoy seeing all the connections you made.)

Keep up the great work!

Wow. That was an intense chapter. Telling such a large history like that in a story can be hard, but you had me (much like Sasuke and Naruto) on the edge of my seat the whole way through. I love how you took a fairy tale and not only spun it with your story, but also a bit canon-ly as well. Amazing.

Can't wait for the next chapter~

This story is AWESOME! And thank you for including the story of Fengshen Yanyi, it helped me out in SO many ways.

Keep writing please!

Jelp!!! You won me with Mine :) I've been reading this story on the sly because it is AU and farfetched at that, it was only on your last update that I realised it was you as I obviously discovered Mine after I had started reading this intermittently... I love where it is going now as the first chapter seemed almost like your typical preteen - and then I woke up - type story. How misleading :)

This last chapter was a chockablock! Informative, purposeful and GRIPPING! I can't believe how much you wove in there... I love the twining of myth and fiction here lol. Dang now I have yet another fic to await updates for with bated breath :) oh and of course am also reading NYNP :)

Whoo! Counting down the fortnight as of now :)

...i should try to learn some chinese its harder than japanese...the names had me lost, but i got it in the end.id just run around with flashelights all the time and learn to sleep with the lights on.are they afraid of fire?i cant really blame naruto for not believeing but it was a long story.so tsunade and jaraya will be coming soon whats that make orochimaru?cant wait for updates

Most important, I'm so happy to hear your doing better. If you haven't got your health then you haven't got anything. Second, i never would have seen that coming, what a way to end a chapter I mean its shocking and exciting and I'm dying to see what happens next. I mean come on....plus Itachi, awwwww he comes back right? But I've always been addicted to your story so I'm so excited to see how Sasuke and Naruto take that lil bit of family history! hehehe yay you!

Amazing story, Jelp. Thank you for amazing read. It's a smoothly written, intruiging story that is opened in a style that resembles such authors as Nora Roberts and Jane Austin. The ideas you bring remind me so much of myne own as a child. The thought of going to the washroom quickly to avoid monsters is something I experienced as a child. Sometimes, even now, I believe there are things at my windows in the dark. Even though the characters are very much OOC, it somehow still works with the plot and in my head is all in order. It's facinating. I thank you for this and hope to read more of it soon. Keep updating!
~Elle

Wooo! Fairies! When I read that I SPAZZED! I was all "No wai! Rly! Lulz! \(^.^)/" I Love it! I was kinda bummed out over how often Itaichi erased their memories, because they keep healing each other...about that, they only seem to be able to heal one another, and there was that whole Sasuke B-day sequence? Does this mean that they are destined to be fairy lovers? Cause if so, I ABSOLUTELY approve! Make it happen!

Great...not STELLAR job! I love this story, and how fantastical it is. I truly adore it, and I can not wait for the next chapter!