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You know, this is probably the most interesting spin on fairies and that particular fantasy world that I have ever seen, not just for Naruto. It reminds me, at times, of Laurrel K. hamilton's Merry Gentry series, but better. I love some of the memory reels in the last chapter. I could see a lot of what was happening to them as I read. I also like the foreshadowing for Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. I almost wish you hadn't used such a huge time jump for them. I'll be looking forward to the next chapters. A quick note on grammar, though. Try not to use so much repetition of your pronouns in the same sentence, especially when you have two subjects there. it gets a little convoluted and awkward. But other than that, a superb showing of fantasy and romance intertwined in a beautiful and original way. I hope it stays this good. I'll be waiting for more.

they were closer than brotherly, and all thanks to a blacklight.cant believe they locked up itahci for trying to save them well he sould be okay.tampered memories like wholey cheese why doesnt naruto remember any of this?hope you can update soon

I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.

Sasuke's a FAIRY?!! is Naruto a fairy too? wow this is just so amazing, it keeps getting better and better! Itachi!! is Itachi okay?
please you have to update real soon, im seriously in love with this story!

O..m...g That was amazing!! Sasukes a fairy!!? I love it! Is naruto one two? that was such an intense chapter, I'm so happy you updated! *has fallen head over heals for this story* I can't be;eive they sent Itachi to the mental hospital O.O!
I can't wait for the next chapter, especially because where you left it was evil <.< very evil <.<

>:(
Im not pleased.
Thanks to your story, Ive stayed up until 3 am! I was gonna go to bed around 1, tops! Now Ill have no sleep at all :<
I think I should write a mail to the site, demanding them to take down this fic cause it makes people stay up late when they shouldnt

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and no, I dont stay up due to being afraid of the dark. I cant sleep when there's a light on, and besides, I got a cat that really likes to protect me from any harm (that she's not inflicting herself). Anyhow, its your fault. Writing more chapters would also result in me staying up even MORE, and that is bad! I got an essay to write! D: Think of the innocent people you're affecting with that writing of yours! D:

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Holy shit. That was amazing. You can really write young characters well, can capture that innocence without it seeming silly. I love this plotline, love its twists. OMG. Update soon XD

You should watch the movie "They". It's ALOT like this.

Fairies?? o_O >OMG!!<


Also, I'm glad you're feeling better. ^^

omg where was this fic before NOW? I cant believe I missed this fic...I saw it and thought I heard the title before so I clicked on it and realized I have never read this before, till today...all I can say is WOW! seriously, I LOVE horry/suprernatural/mystery fics and omg this is so well written, lots of little twists and turns and oh my its just wonderful and when I got to the last chaper I was like nooooooooos I want more....and fairies??? I would not have guessed that, but it makes sense, monsters affraid of the light, your plot running along the lines of a bed time story, yet fairy tale...very good and unique and I cant wait for more.....I hope you condition gets better and you feel well, I know how it feels to be sick, and sometimes not even know you are sick lol, its wierd till you start actually feeling better...anyhow thanks for the wonderful read, I cant wait for more...take care of yourself, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)