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January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
still like this story
but i just read over on y!gal that you were leaving..NO!
I'm sorry that it happened its been done a few times to me but there's plenty of people there that enjoy having you there, you shouldn't leave... i just barley added you there lol,
but i just read over on y!gal that you were leaving..NO!
I'm sorry that it happened its been done a few times to me but there's plenty of people there that enjoy having you there, you shouldn't leave... i just barley added you there lol,
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why people haven't reviewed it but not only did I like it, but the Wicca information was great info. I love the books by Silverwolf (so sorry if I get her name wrong, I'm bad with names); I was really sad in the beginning but seeing how it was posted yesterday, well thanks for sharing I did enjoy it. It would be cute to see Naruto and Gaara's first date :D
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The end? I hope not! You left a lot of ends open there. It was a wonderful touch in bringing Naruto to understand Wicca.
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November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a pretty good story. ^^
I like how Naruto was able to begin to heal, and gain himself a sexy boyfriend in the process. (hehehe) There is a great deal of respect in this piece for the material and I can appreciate that. The story works well as a oneshot, but I wonder how it would do as a multichapter fic. Sasuke is still a problem, but all issues seem to be resolved as far as Naruto is concerned so there's no real reason to continue other than Naruto/Gaara smooches (yummy!) or Sasuke sabotages. As delightful as it would be to see the further development of their relationship, you have no more real conflict to go into. Although they are in the ignorant and intolerant midwest (not that I'm trying to offend anyone who lives there), so the only conflict I could possibly think of that would allow for a larger continued story would be one where Sasuke tries to turn the school against the Wiccans (the only real way I could see Sasuke hurting Gaara or (through Gaara) Naruto.
Overall, it seems everybody's pretty tolerant. Obviously accepting the homosexuality issue and the Wicca. Although I can imagine by looking at the coven's collective that Gaara probably started it and converted Sai, Shika and Hinata. Hinata probably brought in Kiba. So maybe its still low-key. It would possibly be interesting to see Sasuke, already angered over Naruto and now caste aside due to his evil hazing ideas by the rest of the team, to seek revenge and start horrible rumors to hurt the coven and Naruto. Sasuke's obsessed enough that I could easily see him harboring a love hate thing for Naruto under all his frustration. (Not that I would want Naruto to reciprocate! God no! o_o) Although how you would make it work would be up to you. Coming up with a believable conflict that would have a definite resolution would be a challenge that you may or may not be interested in.
Either way, it was an excellent story and I enjoyed reading it. ^^
Keep up the good work!
I like how Naruto was able to begin to heal, and gain himself a sexy boyfriend in the process. (hehehe) There is a great deal of respect in this piece for the material and I can appreciate that. The story works well as a oneshot, but I wonder how it would do as a multichapter fic. Sasuke is still a problem, but all issues seem to be resolved as far as Naruto is concerned so there's no real reason to continue other than Naruto/Gaara smooches (yummy!) or Sasuke sabotages. As delightful as it would be to see the further development of their relationship, you have no more real conflict to go into. Although they are in the ignorant and intolerant midwest (not that I'm trying to offend anyone who lives there), so the only conflict I could possibly think of that would allow for a larger continued story would be one where Sasuke tries to turn the school against the Wiccans (the only real way I could see Sasuke hurting Gaara or (through Gaara) Naruto.
Overall, it seems everybody's pretty tolerant. Obviously accepting the homosexuality issue and the Wicca. Although I can imagine by looking at the coven's collective that Gaara probably started it and converted Sai, Shika and Hinata. Hinata probably brought in Kiba. So maybe its still low-key. It would possibly be interesting to see Sasuke, already angered over Naruto and now caste aside due to his evil hazing ideas by the rest of the team, to seek revenge and start horrible rumors to hurt the coven and Naruto. Sasuke's obsessed enough that I could easily see him harboring a love hate thing for Naruto under all his frustration. (Not that I would want Naruto to reciprocate! God no! o_o) Although how you would make it work would be up to you. Coming up with a believable conflict that would have a definite resolution would be a challenge that you may or may not be interested in.
Either way, it was an excellent story and I enjoyed reading it. ^^
Keep up the good work!