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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It started off way darker than anything I've ever read, but once Iruka rescued Kakashi the first time it got better cause Iruka was always there for Kakashi.
You did this situation and their consequential relationship very well and the fluff was simply adorable.
You did this situation and their consequential relationship very well and the fluff was simply adorable.
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now That was a lovely tale thank you
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I got through this one. I'll get to the other one after I go to bed and sleep for a while. *is very sleepy* It might take me a couple days, though, long as it is. Anyhow, really great story. I liked the twists and turns of the plot. It was drawn out just enough to not get boring and show the development of the relationship well. Having Ibiki be close to Iruka was a major plus. (I'm a bit Ibiki obsessed. XD) You did a good job with the original characters, too. And, I kept hoping Ibiki would catch Genma gossiping. But, I guess Gen made up for it all when he apologized.
Great story. A great read. Looking forward to getting to 'Warlord', hopefully tomorrow.
Great story. A great read. Looking forward to getting to 'Warlord', hopefully tomorrow.
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just re-read this story... and i can sum it up in one word: Awesome!
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking good so far, though Iruka is coming off as upity, I'd think he'd be friends with Genma and the other chunin at the missions office. Then again what do I know, maybe they hate each other and I'm to dim witted to catch the glares. ;D
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O
Stupid angry jounin. Your OC makes me want to kick him in the face....very swiftly.
POOR KAKASHI. ;_;
Stupid angry jounin. Your OC makes me want to kick him in the face....very swiftly.
POOR KAKASHI. ;_;
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an utter bastard. Someone should rape him, so he knows what it feels like.
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Ibiki can do something. Maybe he'll do the torturing thing and turn....waht was his name Aoshi...into a puddle of pain.
I was so scared there for a second that Aoshi was going to kidnap Iruka and make Iruka his new slave. Thank goodness that didn't happen. Xo
I was so scared there for a second that Aoshi was going to kidnap Iruka and make Iruka his new slave. Thank goodness that didn't happen. Xo
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Iruka seems really, really innocent in this fic. And considering the fact that he was the same kind of trouble maker as Naruto when he was younger, I'm not entirely sure if I like this on him.
And even though I want Aoshi to pay for what he did I have a feeling the slippery bastard is gonna find a way to get away scott free. D:<
And even though I want Aoshi to pay for what he did I have a feeling the slippery bastard is gonna find a way to get away scott free. D:<
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay, so sweet. what a wonderful ending! I love it to pieces. :D