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No! That's not fair! T_T
That is completely not fair and Aoshi has them in his sights! T_T
Thanks for the update though! =)

Oh my freaking god. Soooooooooooo goooooooood! Wow, that was phenomenal. You have real talent. This story is so intense. I'm actually trembling right now. I'm dying for more. I literally will wither and perish if you don't keep going. I'm sorry, i'd like to think that usually my reviews are fairly well thought out but i'm still in so much shock that I can't really for coherent comments or compliments.
Okay, one little thing and dear god don't take it as an insult because this story has rocked my world so hard that...that...that i can't even come up with a decent metaphor to finish this sentence. I just want to pass on a tip that was passed on to me in my learning curve of writing. When a new person speaks it should be a new paragraph.
Okay, the complete possessiveness of your OC is brilliant. I also am very fond of the twist on the standard cliche that i myself have fallen prey to where Iruka is the beaten down and abused, fractured and broken character and kakashi swings into save him. I've read a couple of fics that had Iruka as the savior but the authors always made him into a secret anbu or something like that but this was PERFECT! He's still the character we know and love but he's still doing everything to help kakashi. And holy crap, that last chapter was amazing. So hot! So psychological. I'm so glad that kakashi didn't end up hurting Iruka. I have a feeling that when your OC finds them kakashi will eventually pull through his brainwashing and find he's a lot stronger than he ever gave himself credit for. And kick some serious ass i hope.
pleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoingpleasekeepgoing
You rock my world.
Cheers
Meg

I don't think I like where this is going... Kakashi's supposed to be traumatized and afraid of sex because of his abuse, so I don't think it's really realistic for him to act that way with Iruka. (but that's my opinion)
Apart from that, I still love your writing style,even if I don't like dominant!kakashi.

this is so great!! the way you take your time with detail is amazing! please keep this story going it's awesome!

NO! Stupid Iruka, he's not yours! T_T
Thanks for the update! I hope that Iruka can find Kakashi before Aoshi does! =/

I thought Kakashi left the apartment, but I'm glad that he didn't! ^^
And this chapter was h o t HOT! XD
Thanks so much for the update, and I hope that Kakashi can realize that sex doesn't always have to involve pain! =)

i got scared for a moment. i hope kashi learns to deal with his inner demons soon and let iruka love him. i love this story so much.

fantastic hot chapter!

Oh Genma! Genma Genma Genma, bad bad Genma! And after you promised not to say a word. What a giant gossip ho! :D
Poor Iruka,he used the wrong words to comfort his Kashi-kins. Look forward to next chapters. :D

-gasp- oh no! I hope Iruka didn't screw things up too badly. T_T And darn you Genma and your big mouth! The suspense is gonna eat at me till the next chapter. I can't wait. X'D You're doing a kick ass job. I absolutely love this!!!!