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for The Trick Is Not Minding

by sesshabattousai

person Gwenn
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww Kakashi is so cute when he's uncertain ! Thanks for posting so fast ! You're the best ! ^^
person ednial
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! I heart this story!
Please write more ^-^
I beg of you.

~ednial~
person RyuEarth
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am at a lose of words for chpater 7, it is both very touching and sweet, but at the same time it is very depressing and sad! T_T
I hope that Iruka and Kakashi will beable to talk things out, before something ackward happens! =/
Thanks for the update! ^^
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh kakashi is so strong. i feel so heart-broken right now. i just wish i was iruka right now, so i could help him.
person RyuEarth
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Kakashi is getting help! Thanks for the update! =)
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, all of a sudden, Iruka gained medical knowledge? It'd be a lot better if you said something like "Using his excellent memory, Iruka recalled the medical training he received in order to be an Academy teacher. After all, children + dangerous things = kids needing medical help"
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yippee kashi-kun is awake. i'm so happy ^*^

what a way to seal the deal on trusting me to wish death on Aoshi iruka 'he is weaker' lol. that is so like a traumatized copy nin. i'm glad kashi got the strength and self cinfidence to run away. there a really people living in situations like that and they don't have an authour like you to write the story of their lives.

Is it bad of me to wish death on Aoshi? i can't get over the part where he literally fucked a boy to death. that is just twisted.
person RyuEarth
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO! Poor Kakashi! But this chapter was great! Thanks for the update! ^^
person Gwenn
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kakashi...

I love this story, I posted a challenge 2 days ago, and you know what ? This story answers one of the idea I suggested ^^ (the only difference is that I wanted Iruka as the seme) I'm so happy to have found this story !
Goo work !
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH that Aoshi character is so ... cruel. i love this story already, i can see it will have a WELL DESERVED happy ending in Kakashis favour. i was in total shock reading this. please update as regularly as you can ok.