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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... you're taking requests?! I would love an angsty story about Gai and Lee. You know those two want each other so bad... haha
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that scar kashi has can really cut someones self confidence. he has to see it everytime he looks in the mirror. so sad. if Aoshi wasn't dead i'd suggest you kill him lol. it's so sweet that they accept each other, iruka has waited a long time for this.
i wonder how kashi would react knowing iruka killed Aoshi? would it push him further into the world of self pity? would he really deem himself weak and worthless knowing that a mere chuunin defeated someone he couldn't stand up to?
great chapter.
i wonder how kashi would react knowing iruka killed Aoshi? would it push him further into the world of self pity? would he really deem himself weak and worthless knowing that a mere chuunin defeated someone he couldn't stand up to?
great chapter.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last chapter but I was sort of distracted by my thought of "So... is Kakashi not wearing a mask?" and if not, then why isn't Iruka freaking out about it? He had felt saddened over the fact that he hadn't seen his face still... I just would have liked that scene to include that.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww this chapter was sweet. Poor Kakashi... so self conscious ! He was cute ^^ I'm sure his scars don't bother Iruka at all.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for the update! I hope that things will continue to go smoothly for them! =)
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! I'm glad that they are working things out! Thanks for the update! =)
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yippe Aoshi is dead. i can so hug you :) the bastard deserved it. you had me scared i thought kashi was gonna die :( i heart skipped a beat lol. but i know you won't do that :)
all in all great chapter. i got what i wanted out of this lol death to Aoshi by sweet little iruka no less. yippee. :) :)
i hope kashi finds a way to express his feelings to iruka.
all in all great chapter. i got what i wanted out of this lol death to Aoshi by sweet little iruka no less. yippee. :) :)
i hope kashi finds a way to express his feelings to iruka.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah go Iruka !! lol. That bastard Aoshi finally got what he deserved ! Poor Kakashi... but Iruka's gonna take good care of him, I'm sure.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Although I'm glad to see that Aoshi could be dead, I wanted Kakashi to do it, to show that he was stronger then Aoshi, and could over power the man =/
I know that they have alot of problems to work out still, and I'm going to be looking forward to reading them!
Thanks for the update! ^^
I know that they have alot of problems to work out still, and I'm going to be looking forward to reading them!
Thanks for the update! ^^
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit Iruka totally killed Aoshi!!! (Applause!!)
This is a great story. I've really enjoyed reading it. Actually, I got so caught up in reading this that I'm not late for somewhere I need to be so I'll keep this review short.
Keep up the great work! ^^
This is a great story. I've really enjoyed reading it. Actually, I got so caught up in reading this that I'm not late for somewhere I need to be so I'll keep this review short.
Keep up the great work! ^^