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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful retribution! Aoshi deserved it! :D
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. that bastard finally got some of what he deserved. that was a heart breaking vision of iruka being pinned to the wall.
something is really bothering kashi, what is it? is he scared?
something is really bothering kashi, what is it? is he scared?
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter is too abrupt. The way you set it up in the beginning, Kakashi should be shaking in his boots the next time he saw Aoshi. If Kakashi could've just trapped him in the Sharingan, why the hell didn't he do that as a teen? He knew how to use it back then. Maybe the whole "newbie ANBU" kept him from using it, but once he realized that he was deathly afraid, why didn't he just use it?
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kakashi... I hope Iruka will help him again, because I don't think he can figure what's wrong with himself without help.
It's all Aoshi's fault ! lol
It's all Aoshi's fault ! lol
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 13 was sweet and hot, but chapter 14 was sad! But I know that Kakashi is struggling to not become like Aoshi, when he knows that he is T_T
Thanks for the update!
Thanks for the update!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's great that kashi wants to work things out with iruka. but he should at least have said so. i'm awaiting the sunshine after the rain.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
things are really getting interesting. does that bastard Aoshi think everyone is like him? i mean ibiki may have THE look but he is so sweet on the inside especially to iruka.
can't wait for the juicy parts.
can't wait for the juicy parts.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You were right, I like this chapter better ^^
I hope Iruka will kick Aoshi'ass to protect Kakashi ! (even if I don't think he's strong enough to beat an ANBU lol) Both Kakashi and Iruka are in a mess... poor them, I wouldn't want to be in their shoes right now !
I hope Iruka will kick Aoshi'ass to protect Kakashi ! (even if I don't think he's strong enough to beat an ANBU lol) Both Kakashi and Iruka are in a mess... poor them, I wouldn't want to be in their shoes right now !
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh that bastard!!! i hope he doesn't hurt iruka too much. this fic i really an emotional roller coaster ride. keep it up!!
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! This is not fair! This isn't a death fic is it??? I hope not! DX
I hope that you are able to update soon, cause this cliff hanger is just evil!
And, on a softer note, stupid Aoshi for thinking that Kakashi can't top ^^;;
I hope that you are able to update soon, cause this cliff hanger is just evil!
And, on a softer note, stupid Aoshi for thinking that Kakashi can't top ^^;;