rate_review Reviews

Wonderful story so far keep it up.

Just found the story and I really like it. I think Tayuya would be perfect for this story. I have to be honest I never have liked Temari with Naruto at all. I also want ot see what you would do with Tayuya. Thanks for your hard work,

Pretty good; eager to see what happens next.

very good, a slave master based world that is decently build.
a world of sex slaves that are treated like indroducing new and improved gentle guy. i wanna see where you are takeing this.
and now is when i a little biased that there is no "watch" option of aff.

adding to my last comment. send it too fast (sweatdrop)
of the choices you have given i say hina haku kin Tayuya. and add more for the matter, the whole *there has to be a limmit to how many girls one guy can handle* thing... DUDE HAS KAGE BUNSHIN! problem solved, naruto is never out numbered, its the other way around. always.

plus, i think hinata should be the "main" slave. and be boss of the others.
plus+, naruto should beat sasuke and claim sakura. emo's avengers with no loyality do not deserve slaves.

Good to see another chapter of your stories again.So you would like some ideas about this chapter and maybe others? Okay I think since this is his first capture it should be simple things to "tame" Haku, like blindfolding her, spanking, Hinata licking her out, Naruto and his clone double teaming her (with hinata still eating her out) yeah that would be a pleasure overload for a "virgin" Haku. I know you hear alot of requests for certain girls in Naruto's Harem so I'll just ask for 3 and hope, 1. Sakura (I like the idea of Hinata being her boss EVIL HEE HEE HEE), 2. Tayuya (I'm on my hands and knees on this one "PLEASE"), 3. Isaribi (My all time favorite filler girl Hell I hoped she would join the manga she was such a good idea). KEEP up the great writing and have some fun doing this okay?

I was wondering what's going to happen to Sakura?

a fantastic chapter thou i feel i should flame you for cutting it off at the end like that but it was still fantastic as for suggestions you could have Naruto in the future mind you as hes not skilled enough yet use his wind chakra to stimulate his slave/prisoners with both hot and cold air over their sensitive areas such as the clit, nipples and (hot)spots please keep up the fantastic writing and please update again a.s.a.l.a.

D: Keeep updating, this is an awesome story.

finally a new chapter.
You dunno how long I was waiting for it.
As for suggestions, I dunno, maybe you having naruto, Chouji and shikamaru in a slave hunting and capituring some girls like Tayuya, Kin, Samame and Isaribi in there? and taming them in the same room?
Anyway, please, don't take so long to update. your storie are inspiring me to write to write my own slave/bondage story.