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please more of this story .o)

Read the story Slaves of the Maelstrom, that may give you some ideas. Have Naruto obtain a were-kyuubi form(like the zoans from One Piece) and use his tails in 'interesting' ways. Also have a Naruto/Naruko(Kage-bunshin using Oiroke no jutsu)/Hinata/Kurenai/Haku/Anko(using snakes on the girls) lemon. Also add some filler girls like Yakumo and Isaribi. And add Fuka(from Shippudan), Yugito, Temari, Tayuya, Kin, and Hana.

Good to have the story back, and I can't wait for the next chapter. you know, it would be funny if Sakura walked in on them and got even more jealous.

Very awesome, Haku is a lucky girl! I can't wait to see her fully accept being Naruto's slave.

YAY! GO NARUTO! SEX ALL AROUND! LOL! I wonder if Naruto will nab Temari or Ino. Or maybe Tenten. LOL! Write more ASAP!

Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter update soon.

I had almost forgotten about this story. Out of curiousity, what's a kadaicha? I can't find anything on google and the closest weapon I can think of is the kodaichi or Japanese short sword. It's good to know that you'll upload the sequel. I'd kind of like to see Sasuke at least attempt to challenge Naruto, either cause he wants to prove himself stronger or wants Naruto-san's slaves. I don't really want Sakura to be Naruto's slave, it just seems like something the Uchiha would do. Guy only had 2 really cool people in his family: his ultimate badass brother and his kind, sweet, total MILF of a mom. I'd like to see Naruto *convert* Kin and/or Temari during the chuunin exams and maybe Tayuya at some point. How about Hana and/or Tsume as lovers, if not slaves? They'd probably already have won their freedom but their very good looking and severely undersexed in fanfiction. It seems you might do it regardless, but it'd be rather cool to see Kurenai fall for Naruto as well. And she's already having sex with him so that's between 1/3 and 1/2 of the work done already.

I like hinata.haku,kin, and tayuya haku kina nd tayuya died way to fast.

Please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

Excellent work. As for your per-village idea, that's fine by me. (I just want Sakura and Ino to end up happy).