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plz update

Reccomendation,
Try to add Tayuya as a slave during the "Sasuke Retreival Arc" if you can find a way to do so.

that's one of the best slave fics I ever read!
I think Naruto would be good to add Fem Haku, sakura, Sasame and Isaribi into the harem while Shikamaru would have Temari and Tayuya as their slaves.
Please, update as soon as possible.

You know, I think I will try to do my first hentai/slave fic. your fic really inspired me.

I think that when sausuke leaves the village Naruto should take sakura as a slave s how about this then Saku-Kin-Temari as well sorry if its against ur taste but i just dont like haku hes a bit weird

Nice start, here's to hoping that Kiba dosen't try anything, and for the paring desition I say Tayuya, youve done Hinata, Anko, Ino, Temari, Tenten, Haku, Kin, Isaribi, Sasame, and Kyuubi in the forest of lust story, so why don't you try something new (there's also the fact that I like the foul mouthed redhead, she's sexy when in her second level curse seal form, and I think that Hinata could keep the little fire ball in line if naruto captures her)

Also, your elements are off, it goes Fire beats Wind, Wind beats Lighting, Lighting beats Earth, Earth beats Water, Water beats Fire. Just so you know

great story so far, as for the vote i say tayuya! honestly i lean towards tayuya and temari added along haku and kin. both of those girls are proud characters so i do hope add them both, but if not i vote for tayuya.

very nice again

decent chapter, i would say to go with the Temari option. All I can say though is that really want to see more romantic situations (not lemons persay) between Naruto and Hinata. I really hope that as this story progresses that Naruto will devote himself to Hinata as his most important 'slave' and all.

Good story needs to have haku.

Awesome chapter update soon.

Hinata, Haku, Kin, and Temari