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for Slave for you

by DarthValgaav

schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one update soon.

Haku
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This fic reminds me of Slyfer101's fics. I'd suggest as flower tattoo tits and pierced tits and clit for Hinata. Also add Yakumo, Isaribi, Fuka and Yugito.
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha now this story is sexy! Inventive!
I love it! You so gotta keep going.
Kudos!!!
^_^
person jaxlax21
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great, but you need to update this faster. I had been waiting on this for like 3 months haha. Anyway, I vote to incude Temari and not Haku, you know since she is an actual girl and not a boy (I've always hated Fem!Haku). I hope this cntinues stronly and that Hinata will always be the one closest to Naruto.
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hard choice! haku!
good chap
person VFSNAKE
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! As for voting I say let both be in his harem. Why can't he have both? With his stamina he could have them all.
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In all honestly I vote For Haku cause I liked the character, (poor Shikamaru tag teamed by ino and temari; troublesome doesn't even come close) and I think a nice orange spiral tattoo above Hinata's butt and all his girl slaves would be approprate. Thank you for the chapter.
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that was interesting i look forward to the bondage gear getting used also my vote is for Haku more chemistry for them and if anything i would have Kin taken off your list only need one sound girl i also think you have made Naruto a little naive about the the world as far as slaves go i think he would have know a little more or taught more about given he grew up with there but anyways still good look forward to more and hopefully quicker updates but don't rush
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, man. Please, update more often! I beg you! Plus, why not just include all the Kunoichi you want? More fun all around, heh heh... :P
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would vote for female Haku. Temari would seem to be a rather forceful girl, and so are Tayuya and Kin, Haku would be a calmer influence, and would probably help Hinata balance it out. And I hope Sasuke losses Sakura to someone, and Ino puts on a few pounds (she's always too thin)