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Honestly, if it was only a choice between Haku and Temari, then I would go with Haku. As far as I'm concerned no one needs a kind master more than her. However, I think a better harem would be Haku, Temari, Hinata, and Kin, leaving Tayuya out. I say give her to Shikamaru. The irony of giving him such a troublesome girl is just too good to miss. If anything, it'll help him develope some backbone. Also, that way Naruto gets one kunoichi per village of origin (Leaf, Sand, Sound, and Mist). Sometimes the most important element of a harem is variety.

Seriously, think about it.

temari plz

Good good good.
As for the Haku or Temari. Give Haku to Naruto and give Temari to Shikamaru. Like a gift from Naruto just in case he need sameone smart.
Oh please let Chouji keep Ino and show them to! I really like that pair and there are not many fic with them in it.. Hell you can make Ino fat from liveing with the Akimichi for all I care. I just what to see them for one chapter please!Oh and lemon if you are filling nice.

Well Nice story so far. As for the Temari or Haku, I say Haku should be with Naruto and let Shikamaru or someone else (ecept Sasuke) have Temari. A request could Naruto also get Yugito (jinchurikki of the Nibi) as a slave as well (most likely through someone trying to get Hinata for the Byakugan).

Honestly, this is some pretty good stuff. I was a bit iffy about the slavery thing, but you made a great start with it. I hope you will continue with the story.

Please update soon

Update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like this very much! You need to continue this story asap!

I enjoyed this story. Hope we get to see more soon.

This is actually very good. Personally, I hope Sakura and Ino end up as Naruto's slaves (thanks to the challenge rule). Might want to proof-read for spelling and grammatical errors. That aside, I look forward to more.