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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh another brilliant story from you looking forward to reading more of it
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Kurenai was so straight-forward! But I definitely love where this is going! Keep up the great work!!!
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
niiiiiiiiiiiice. This idea is so original, hope you update soon.
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story can't wait for the next chapter update soon.
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
an interesting new twist to things, although it is a bit odd how three of the boys didn't get anyone maybe you can fix that up later with other characters that maybe get captured or taken in like people such as like Kin, Sasume etc. Just seems a little unfair that way. Also I really hope that Naruto wins Sakura, I never ready any decent Naruto/Hinata/Sakura stories, usually it's Naruto/Sakura/Ino but never of the two girls that are actually romantically linked to Naruto for some reason.
They way I see it as I know she'll love the thought of being with Sasuke but I doubt he would treat her well, most likely just keep her out of his way for training and her first night ended with him telling her that he has more important things to do than have her in his bed. Maybe Naruto could see this challenges him and eventually beats him and you can have Sakura seeing how hard he's fighting for her might make her appriciate things and you got to admit that being his slave would help her to make up for her past. Plus Hinata could be put 'in charge' of any other girls as well which could make for some interesting scenes later on with whoever else shows up too.
They way I see it as I know she'll love the thought of being with Sasuke but I doubt he would treat her well, most likely just keep her out of his way for training and her first night ended with him telling her that he has more important things to do than have her in his bed. Maybe Naruto could see this challenges him and eventually beats him and you can have Sakura seeing how hard he's fighting for her might make her appriciate things and you got to admit that being his slave would help her to make up for her past. Plus Hinata could be put 'in charge' of any other girls as well which could make for some interesting scenes later on with whoever else shows up too.
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! I love your story idea!!! I can't wait to see who's next on the kunoichi list, hmmm... Kin, Tayuya? (evil grin) Please more soon! Hey does this mean that Sasuke could get rid of Sakura at any time? Naruto vs Sasuke for Hinata and Sakura? (EVEN BIGGER EVIL GRIN) WAY COOL!!! I can't wait for the next chapter and I love your cat girl idea very good.
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay I totally agree with Agent G on that idea so (gets on hands and kness and begs) please listen to that idea it's really good. You can give credit to Agent G and still make one hell of a chapter. PLEASE!!! (Sobbing histerically) Oh yeah I almost forgot ***** five stars for a great chapter and idea!!!
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hella great.
It must suck to be one of the guys arbitrarily stuck in sausage party like kiba.
It must suck to be one of the guys arbitrarily stuck in sausage party like kiba.