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what other cite are you taking about

dude loving this storie can't wait for next update could you send me a message when the next chapter comes out

Nice idea, really enjoyed reading it.. Please write more soon :D

good work hope for more soon

Awesome, you updated! I've been hoping you'd continue this for a while now.

Not bad a food-sex scene, It's pretty hard to find around here, and I think You pulled it off quite nicely. And I commend you for keeping Naruto's loyalty to Hinata intact, it's fairly common that whenever another girl comes into the picture he just sort of spreads the love around. It's good to see a more realistic version of how another girl would actually affect how he interacts with Hinata.

Why wouldn't Naruto be allowed to refuse the challenge? It seems like a moronic rule, it would make no sense... But, hey it's your plot device, so I wont gripe about it too much.

Hope to see more from you soon!

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Please update soon!!

Wait, so did Sasuke get in any trouble for the shit he tried to pull? Is he going to have to pay, or lose Sakura or something?

are their going to be more chapters on this story. It looks like your plan to continue in forest of lust.

AWSOME dude cant wait till the next chapter!

Glad to see you back on this story. It's not about the fighting so I don't mind a short fight. Hope to see more.
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