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for Slave for you

by DarthValgaav

schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was happy to see this story again. I love most of your smut fics here and I love the premise behind this one. Forest of lust was one of the first ones I forced myself past my love of NaruSaku to enjoy. Keep it up and let this story flourish.
person magic713
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice update. It's good that Naruto now has another slave that he can treat better than her previous master. I hope to see another update soon. :)
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thank you for sharing another great chapter please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah that was a short fight but Kiba isn't known for being the brightest pup in the kennel and thankfully Isaribi couldn't get used as a weapon in the fight. Isaribi is now in Narutos's slaves eh, cool! Naruto and his girls will treat her right. I wonder how he's going to get Tayuya? It's great to see you writing again and can't wait for more.
person VFSNAKE
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! GO NARUTO! Got laid and now has a new girl. Kiba should get a nice kick in the balls for his actions by Naruto.
person garsdal
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wonderful, its been a long time since i checked this story, and imagine how pleased i was when it was updated!
a filler girl you say.... there has been a lot of those.
yakumo kurama? Toki-hime? isaribi? sasame fuma? haruha-hime? let us know soon, please?
person zamrok55
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one too. but i have a question: when do you update?
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great update, and my guess is...Isaribi.


Here's Hoping.
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey just finished the last released part^^

And I love the plot, and well I wanted to ask if you could make a parall story about the other pairings like sasusaku, or inoxchoji, I was getting curious after I read sasuke wasn´t so good after all and stuff. So I really would enjoy a story like that^^

and anyways just wanted to say that it was a really good idea to let haku train wind and water nature, smart move^^

so think about the idea looking forward for the story to continue hugz Kate^^
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you should give him Tayuya from sound and Yugito from cloud shes the 2 tail contaner