rate_review Reviews

Great fic, man!! I love the premise! It reminds me of Pokegirls. If you don't know what pokegirls are, go to angelfire.com/mn3/pokegirls/main.html. In fact, you said in chapter one, something about a story involving Hinata, Kin, and Tayuya as cat girls. Using the idea of pokegirls, would be a great way to do it. I also love the girls Naruto is being paired with. Hinata and Tayuya are my two favorite girls to pair with Naruto, I like Haku, and Kin is very rarely used, and I like rare pairings (another plus for Haku). You're lemons are pretty good too, but I would like for them to be longer. In my opinion, lemons can never be long enough!! I can't wait to see who the other person you've decided to add to Naruto's harem is! Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!

Great story. pretty cute and sweet for a slave story, but this definetly makes it a winner. can't wait to see who he ends up with next

love it keep it going

hey i am a big fan of this story and i want to read more can not wait to see next chapter.

really i love the idea of this work and support it.
i see it going for atleast 12 chapters till the time skip with Tsunade, hinata, tayuya(my fav), temari(second fav), and kin. haku just feels like a stretch

Not bad... this has a plot while still being sexy as all hell. I think that there seems to be some Sasuke bashing in this... not that I mind.

Sasuke's already turning out to be a bastard, though it's wasn't that long of a fall.

Awesome! I'm glad Sasuke didn't get what he wanted. Ironically enough he helped Naruto out. I can't wait to find out about Sasuke's punishment. Kick that bastard in the nuts. LOL!

Nice chapter. I love how happy Haku is with Naruto and Hinata. I want to see Sasuke and Sakura punished big time!

great stuff