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December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wowzers!
i can't wait for the next installment...just wow!
i can't wait for the next installment...just wow!
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My goodness. This story is fabulous. Nice reversal of roles - it's usually Naruto who's the one experiencing all the angst but the stoic seeming Uchiha who is actually a seething hotbed of emotions always rings more true with me. I almost think it was too easy that Naruto caught him as he was leaving for the airport. It would have been nice to see Sasuke start to build a life away from Naruto for a change, after all that hurt. What the heck was Naruto doing, anyway? I only hope Sasuke isn't going too easy on him by forgiving him right away. I'm confused, but the jumping viewpoints from the beginning to the middle of the story is actually interesting. I like the older brother dynamic, too. Itachi's rough but brotherly concern for Sasuke and his underweight appearance. Sasuke being the one the family uses to express the drama and outrage against Neji. And Itachi actually human with Hinata. I'd love to see more ItachixHinata too! Please, please don't abandon this story. I haven't enjoyed a fic like this one since I read SuishouTenshi's "The World Was All Before Him".
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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my. oh my. this was so beautiful. i'm sure you know it. i can't wait for the next chapter. i may have to read from the beginning again... but why did Naruto reject Sasuke when he came to see him at his club? I'm totally confused about that. Argh. I guess I'll figure it out soon enough.
thanks so much for writing!!
audrey
thanks so much for writing!!
audrey
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!! Heheheheheh =^^= Yay!@! I'm so happy they got back together!!! I loved the moment when Sasuke finally read that letter. Omigod!
But seriously: "Next up...love can never guarantee forgiveness and neither can forgiveness love..."
You're going to give this couple MORE drama?? o_o NOOOOOO!!!!!! They finally got back together!!!! :(
Keep up the excellent work. ^^
But seriously: "Next up...love can never guarantee forgiveness and neither can forgiveness love..."
You're going to give this couple MORE drama?? o_o NOOOOOO!!!!!! They finally got back together!!!! :(
Keep up the excellent work. ^^
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOOW that is just so fucked up. my heart clenched in my chest when i read what naruto wrote on the paper, oh no, i had a feeling. so so sad. i'm glad naruto managed to catch him but there is still so much he needs to explain. still think he was super harsh when sas came to see him after he got out. and why didnt he go see him sooner while sas was talking thru the door?? nervous? what? ooohhh i LOVE this! make haste with the next installment please! :D
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG this chapter almost made me cry. I love this story, plain and simple. It's so breath-taking and captured me from the very first chapter when it first came out(darn laziness and nothing-to-talk-about-itis). Poor Sasuke.....I'm so glad Naruto went after him. T-T
I can't wait for you to update, but then again, this is a story worth waiting for, very well written.
Much love~ <33
I can't wait for you to update, but then again, this is a story worth waiting for, very well written.
Much love~ <33
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. The use of the letter of complaint as a main plot device in unexpected way was a wonderful move. I throughly enjoyed this chapter. Please update once more when you have the chance.
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* that was touching. I was confused by the prior chapter, but this latest chapter tied a lot of the loose knots and made sense of most of the plot. Please note that confusing readers is not always a bad thing! I kept coming back mainly because I wanted to figure out what was going on.
I love your Sasuke! I like your Naruto, but really your portrayal of the Uchiha family--especially Sasuke--is simply awesome. Nyaaa! I'm so happy that he and Naruto have at least taken the initial steps of fixing their messed up relationship.
I miss your Gaara... *sniffles again*
I love your Sasuke! I like your Naruto, but really your portrayal of the Uchiha family--especially Sasuke--is simply awesome. Nyaaa! I'm so happy that he and Naruto have at least taken the initial steps of fixing their messed up relationship.
I miss your Gaara... *sniffles again*
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! It was really nice to learn more about Naruto and Sasuke's history and why things are the way they are. Will our boys be able to mend their relationship or has too many things happened?
Thank you so much for this chapter and I can't wait to read more!
Thank you so much for this chapter and I can't wait to read more!
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I actually had tears in my eyes ;_; great chapter <3