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I love this story, so many things still waiting to be revealed, voyeurism, depth of emotion, family. Thanks for writing!

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
how do you expect me to survive like this???
ok. i'm rational now. well, i gotta hand it to you again : impeccable story-telling, well-crafted plot, and amazingly interpreted characters. although i still prefer Sasuke from Life Before Life After (yeah, i've got a soft spot for the angsty, tortured, cruel son of a bitch).
I don't think you know how unlikely this is... I DO NOT read AU. i don't. i don't like it. i read yours just because i fucking worship your writing. how sad is that? and you make me like it! argh!
ok. i think you've got the idea. thanks for writing!!!
audrey

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Sasuke is a wreck.

I just read chapters 2-4. Sasuke is so sad to see like that. What happened between them? Is there still a chance for them? I hope so...but the end of that last chapter...Naruto was there the whole time?! Sasuke didn't sound overjoyed to figure that out either. I'll still hope for them though. Thanks for the shout out in chapter 2. Keep up the good work and hopefully I'll see you soon in chapter five. ^_^

While I'm glad you came out with another chapter, there were a couple misspellings and confusing dialogue that kind of took away the magic of the story. Your previous chapters looked more refined and proof-read in comparison, but I still like the chapter. It seems like you're presenting it in pieces, and while that method keeps the audience in suspense and wanting more, it can get a little confusing and overboard. For about half the chapter I was wondering if I'd missed something in the last because you made references to something that happened in Sasuke and Naruto's past but never elaborated. I'm sure it'll all clear up in the end, but it almost sounded as if you made a mistake rather than making past references on purpose.

I was also wondering: if Naruto didn't want Sasuke to know he was in the other room, then why'd he send the plant that explicitly said "Namikaze, Inc."? Naruto bolted the door and stuck a chair to make sure Sasuke couldn't get in, but why give away his identity and then lock the door? Did you write that on purpose? I may be considering things too deeply or maybe I really did miss something, but all in all, I like the story and its development, as well as how it's written. I look forward to the next chapter.

wow, i didnt expect naruto's reappearance to happen like this. it was sooooo good. i was so excited to read it yet i was trying to read slow so i wouldnt reach the end of the chapter so soon. Haha. Sasuke's relationship with Itachi is awesome. Their Dad is quite amusing too. I looove this to pieces!

Aish. This is really good. Please update once more when you have the chance, this is an excellent story.

this is very good, but i have to ask, while Sasuke deliberated, while he deliberated what? I'm so confused, but I love this story, it's so damn sad though. I keep hoping it will be happy soon. Can't wait for more. Slave

You do angsty Sasuke so very well, I'm not sure if I could ever express how very well it is done. (<= Oh yes, height of expression right there XD) I mean. Oh, whatever. Sasuke's a little emo boy and we all know that that's just how he is, although you seem to give 'emo' a whole new, much-needed, and somehow surprising... uh... seems-realistic-ness. (Once again I am obviously a master of expressing myself -_-;)

However I.. don't know when Sasuke would have had time to see Gaara's execution...? I mean, he lost it right after the case and was then shipped directly to Hawaii, wasn't he? Maybe I missed something << >> ><;

In any case, please keep it going, because I absolutely adore your style!

This is just getting more and more intriguing. I can't wait to learn more about our boys! I want them together and I want to know all about what happened in their past. Oh and I cried when you wrote about the death of Gaara...I love him.

Thank you so much for this and I long to read more!