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for Cut Your Eyes

by anlaaria

person Meikyuu
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing! Exciting. And I love what you've done with Gaara, even though I'm sad about the results. Your portrayal of Sasuke is wonderful. I'm a little confused about the 180 with Naruto, but that's what has me intrigued. Why didn't they get together (outside of the fact that the story would be over then ^_^;;) Anyway, I don't get a chance to visit AFF that much anymore, but I'll definitely come back sooner than later solely for the purpose of reading Cut Your Eyes. I hope that you'll have updated by then. Thank you for the read.
person Fayte
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an awsome story! Whats going to happen next I can't even guess ^^
person Word_Slave
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is very very good! and this is stupid but I'm so mad at naruto... whatever.. I try not to do that but it's a very good story and I can't wait for more
Slave
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay a second chapter and some more back story as to what the hell is going on between Naruto and Sasuke. I can't believe you had Gaara sentenced to lethal injection though :(
person Sailor Kismet
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please continue.
person Jelp
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Interesting. So Naruto has loose lips when he drinks? Ah, I wonder. I wonder what happened to make the two of them break apart. Clearly Naruto tried to escape - but he went back and got set free. Very interesting indeed. Looking forward to the next chapter!

~ Jelp
person TheSimi
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter! I loved to read more about Sasuke and Naruto's history and now I understand why Naruto was so pissed at Sasuke a lot better. It's sad to see Gaara sentenced to death...I like him slightly demented (or in this case a lot). What has Naruto been up to these three years and what will happen when he and Sasuke meet again?

Thank you so much for this chapter and again I can't wait to read more!
person SangoStar
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that ending was great. I think the flashback was wonderful and you have me hooked. I can't wait for chapter 3!!!!
person Mija
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmaooo ok the whole Gaara stabbing Sasu with a spoon made me laugh my butt off I swear and pictureing Kakashi crying like a little girl is just priceless, but why is Naru being so mean? Is it because Sasu took his sweet darn time in gettin in touch with him??? its not like Naru didnt know where to get a hold of Sasu, or is it because he didnt keep his promise? And please update this soon, what do you mean Gaara does it for reals? He actually forks Sasu up? Hehe a little pun...anyhow I am enjoying this, thank you for the nice long chapter and I hope to see a new one soon, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person SangoStar
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the first chapter. You've given the characters a lot of depth and flare. I can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up. ~SangoStar