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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was uhh...really good! I don't know what I was expecting but I received a pleasant surprise. Nice work.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic! The character dynamics so far are pretty cool; I like the whole annoying older brother Itachi, and the ex-cons treating Sasuke like that. I'm interested to see what Sasuke's whole deal is with his history and his job and everything. Very cool!
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't exactly get the title, but I loved the story.
You did a great job on the first chapter, and I hope you update soon with more.
- Jordan.
You did a great job on the first chapter, and I hope you update soon with more.
- Jordan.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah!! This is legitimately good. You definitely need to continue!
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far. It seems like there might be more going on between Haku and Naruto again, but who knows? I hope Naruto still wants Sasuke! Looking forward to the next chapter. ~ Jelp
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
BTW, have you decided what the pairings for this story would be?
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
BTW, have you decided what the pairings for this story would be?
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was really good. I didn't want it to end! I feel so sad for sasuke. Can't wait for explanations!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can't believe Naruto basically kicked him out. I'm all sad now :(
I absolutely love your writing. I love how you managed to take Sasuke & Naruto and put them in a completely different setting and change their history and yet their almost friendship seemed believable and realistic. I can't wait to read more, and now I'm off to read baby, baby, baby!
I absolutely love your writing. I love how you managed to take Sasuke & Naruto and put them in a completely different setting and change their history and yet their almost friendship seemed believable and realistic. I can't wait to read more, and now I'm off to read baby, baby, baby!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like the story.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. For an intro, this was a excellent first chapter. So much going on. O_O
I was almost surprised to see Naruto act harshly to Sasuke. I'm assuming he's mad at him for not coming to visit or even talk to him after getting freed from prison. I also think its rather cool that Naruto seems to be hooking his old prison mates up with jobs after they get out. Definitely makes for an intimidating environment for the Uchiha, though. :P
Also, Ha! Gaara stabs Sasuke with a spoon!! Excellent.
Keep up the good work!
I was almost surprised to see Naruto act harshly to Sasuke. I'm assuming he's mad at him for not coming to visit or even talk to him after getting freed from prison. I also think its rather cool that Naruto seems to be hooking his old prison mates up with jobs after they get out. Definitely makes for an intimidating environment for the Uchiha, though. :P
Also, Ha! Gaara stabs Sasuke with a spoon!! Excellent.
Keep up the good work!