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for Price of Cheating

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great update Sasuke really had it coming. Stupid Sasuke hurting Naruto anyway con't when you can.
person Yabun
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, Sasuke got what he deserved. I'm glad that Ino didn't behave all bitchy with a bad case of POFD (Posessive Overbearing Fan Disorder). She was all mature about it, that's what I like to see! Thanks for updating the 2nd installment!

'Til next ti...What's this? *picks up little Ego* Awww, it's soo cute! *gently strokes it* You're a big strong Ego that belongs to a creative writer. Yes you are :D I've this story saved on my Favorites list since this first came out, all the while I was patiently waiting for the much-anticipated update. Aren't you proud to have a cool owner? *tickles Ego and gives it a few ego-friendly cookies*
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is give me more, please feed the reader monster. :) I really liked the story and boy can I relate on how being cheated on feels and it is one of the most unforgiveable sins someone can do to another person. Thank you for the time and effort it took to write the story can't wait to read more.
person monrque
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is so much more than i hoped for.
It looks like there will be more to go Yes?
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it! More, more, more!!! *picks ego up and feeds with warm brownies* *cuddles*
person k
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
He deserves that. Finally something where Sasuke actually get what's coming to him.
person CFear
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story expecially the song 'before he cheats' ^_^ please continue it's good.
person k
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love you for not using sakura. i'm also glad that you didn't make ino into a crazy fangirl that will get the guy no matter what.
person Lanie12777
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I was so happy when I saw you'd updated this story! Second chapter was great (I just love the part where Sasuke sees what Naruto did to his car!), makes me want to read even more. Can't wait for the next chapter, I'll definitely be looking out for it!:)
person Anon
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have really really enjoyed the first two chapters of this story, and will be checking back for updates all the dern time. I like it a lot, and you've done a great job so faw. A few errors, but the story is well worth it. You barely notice them anyway! The content more than makes up for tiny tiny tiny tiny flaws lol. Please update soon, you've got me salivating on my keyboard, hungry for more!