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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ILOVEDIT!!! And the part about the camera!!! OMG! I SOOO wanna read about it! ahaha I think it would be hilarious to know what sasuke's reaction was!
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah someone deffinitly lives up to thier username. ^^ great fic. I'm always up for sasuke bashing, but you added the itachi/naruto thing too, nice touch. I think it really deserves to be more then a oneshot. its good and I hope you continue it.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You could easily extend this into a mutichapter story. Revealing Sasuke's reaction to his car's destruction, trying to work things out with Naruto. Chapters where Itachi and Naruto build a relationship. Sasuke's reaction to losing Naruto to his brother. Maybe even have them use a surrogate to have a child for them, maybe Hinata. Kakashi and Iruka and their antics.
While it is a good one shot it has a lot of potential to be expanded. I think most of us would like to see where this goes next.
While it is a good one shot it has a lot of potential to be expanded. I think most of us would like to see where this goes next.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the direction this first chapter has gone... I can't wait to read more..XD
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OUUUU!!!!! I love! ^-^ So vindictive! ^-^ So he gonna end up with Itashi by anychance! ^-^
P.S.(Moiira)
P.S.(Moiira)
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE! It would be really cool if you continued this fic. I want to know what
Sasuke's reaction will be and if Naruto and Itachi develop a relationship.
Sasuke's reaction will be and if Naruto and Itachi develop a relationship.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For the love of god, please continue! Please, for all the (hopefully, if this really is the pairing) ItaNaru-lovers out there!
This fic is original eventhough it has some events that are usual. Like Sasuke marrying someone else to continue his line for example.
Anyway, it's awesome and I kept snickering while reading this. I really like how you portrayed the characters.
So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
This fic is original eventhough it has some events that are usual. Like Sasuke marrying someone else to continue his line for example.
Anyway, it's awesome and I kept snickering while reading this. I really like how you portrayed the characters.
So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that was an amusing read!I loved the orange permanent ink bit- nice touch- but how come no one inside the house came out to investigate the noise once Naruto began laying into the car's glass? I think you could leave this as a one shot or make it into a multichapter story. Good story!
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! Please continue this story...I can't wait to read more. It kept me enthralled through the entire chapter. Hell, I let my lunch get cold cause I couldn't pull away.