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for Price of Cheating

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this is fantastic.
I would love to read more if that's where the story goes.

I like that Itachi just sits and watches, though I'd probably have done the same thing.
I really want to see Sasuke's reaction though.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, make it a series? Wonderfully written and love the plot.
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you HAVE to continue!
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would really love to see his reaction to that...
person ShadowofLight
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so good :D I want to see that ass's reaction to. You know, I think you should continue it but if you don't it does make a good one shot.
person Jeanna23
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please please please continue. I want to read about Sasuke's reaction.
I also want to see Itachi & Naruto together.
person YaoiFan!!
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA!! Thou Shalt Not Cheat!

I wouldn't mind a sequel with Naruto/Itachi :-).
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Easy answer there, TW....MORE MORE MORE!!!!
person Rose
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I feel bad for the car but it was a necassary sacrifice. I'm not so sure you should make this into a multi-chaptered mega story, but I would love to see Sasuke's reaction, both to the car, but more importantly, the realization of what he messed up and has lost. I admit i'm a sucker for a Sasuke that realizes how horribly he's fucked up. Whatever you decide to do with this, it definitely needs some sort of closure piece, Sasuke finding the car, reading the letter, or just Naruto finding his way to a new home and life. If you do decide to leave it as it is, I still think that would work, but I am the kind of person that likes all doors being shut at the end of a story. Whatever you do, I do like your work and am happy you've posted another story.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was verry good!!!
You should write Sasuke's reaction.