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for Price of Cheating

by NinjaToadsAteMyBaby

schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha sasuke really had that coming lol. naru really went to work on that car lol. but i would love to see sasukes reaction. and i wanna know how naru found out.

could they get back together? i mean sasu not marrying ino, jus having her make the baby. i wrote a fic with that base. cuz sasu really found someone close to naru so it would seem like it's a part of both of them.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should continue. Sasuke shouldn't find out about Itachi and Naruto until they're getting married themselves, olny to realize he's too late.
person monrque
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well long time no see. i am glad to read something
from you.
Please continue this a little more. I want to see sasuke's
reaction to this. and maybe some lovely smex LOL
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is begging to be AT LEAST a twoshot. c'mon you know you want to. pretty please?
person Fox_Trot
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continue. It is good.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao!! it's better than the one i read with iruka doing that to kakashi and then being screwed by naruto on the hood of kakashi's car! i so wanna see how this finishes up!!
person TheSimi
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful and amusing! Sasuke really was an ass in this one and I'm glad that Naruto trashed the car. I would LOVE it if you made this a MC. Thank you so much for this chapter!
person Mystic Neko
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please do a one shot on Sasukes reaction.
person Good Chaos
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!! Will you make a sequeal to this I hope? I wanna know what the hidden camera will show. XD
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue it, I would really like to read the reaction and also see Naruto and Itachi get together. Ino being barren would sweeten the deal also.(but they can't find out till after their married.)