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what happened to the next chapter coming out soon! Y.Y

Oh MY!!!!!!!!! This is so monstorous!!!!!!!!!!! Konoha's people are all monsters!!!!!!!!!! They are sadistic monsters and scums who are only enjoying others sufferings!!!!!!!!!!!!! They protect people and justice???? And Sasuke is the worst and the one who betrayed them...??? Not in million lives!!! They are all so much of monsters that I don't take them as human at all... and not only that... they are going and sacrifice everything just because they are idiots... and Kakashi is of course such a dissapointment... Nothing else... I really think that Sasuke should go away from that cursed Konoha... They didn't deserve Sasuke and Kakashi definitely didn't deserve Sasuke... He is just a scum as others!!!! UFFFF... I hopefully but really hopefully expect that you will make them suffer for all they do to them and especially to Karin and Jugo.

Oh, one more thing: What the hell Suigetsu is trying to do??? Wasn't he the one who always wanted to kill someone? He shouldn't stop Sasuke from killing all those monsters! He really betrayed Sasuke... I didn't expect that...

MORE PLEASE!!!!!

But aside with the Kakashi, maybe that was the part of the plan too, who knows, but what I must say that this sentence: "However I believe you will make Konoha into the village it pretended to be." is so true, the core of all problems in whole manga, because other villages are not ideal but at least they knew that they are not perfect and they don't pretend to be perfect and always tried to repair their mistakes and not to hide them like Konoha which always gave this sort of ideal village, pretended to be perfect and always hid the dark side which is much worse and hypocrite for me.

What the heck???? In chapter 15 why the hell Kakashi betrayed Sasuke so easily? What's wrong with him... every time when there is situation with Sasuke, and that is happening because Sasuke has so many enemies, Kakashi is on the Konoha's side, doesn't he trust Sasuke?... Kakashi really disappoints me in this fic, he is even worse now when he has become Hokage, he is all in his rules... He really didn't learn anything from Obito.

this is an absoloutly lovly fic!!!! I stubled over it and I really love it!!!! I really hope to hear from you soon!!!!

Ok. I keep reading this in different stories and it always irritates me. I do not know if someone read the word in another story and inferred its meaning by how it was used or what, but I have to say something. Authors keep using the word 'withering' to describe someones actions or movement during an otherwise steamy lemon. Withering is what flowers do... as in flowers wither and die. I do not think that writhers mean to imply that their ukes are shriveling up and drying out. I think the word that they are trying for is 'writhing' which means to squirm around sometimes in a serpentine fashion.

Sorry that I went on a rant in your review since this is something that actually concerns lots of fictions. I love your story and hope you write tons more in the future. I especially like the more personal way you are writing Kakashi.

Lovely smut in chapter 12 ... so nicely written. Full of love and respect.

this is great i hope u do another chapter