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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nasty cliffhanger and poor sasuke... You writing is still great and you have found a good beta. I think I like your version better than the manga for now. Have you seen naruto eyes??
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^__^ I'm loving this over here, too!
Oh ho ho, Sasuke, you sneaky thing. That was a cool twist, letting Kakashi do all those things inside genjutsu :) And yay for Suigetsu! :D
Another good chapter, and I look forward to more!
Oh ho ho, Sasuke, you sneaky thing. That was a cool twist, letting Kakashi do all those things inside genjutsu :) And yay for Suigetsu! :D
Another good chapter, and I look forward to more!
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December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:o Next chapter already... i like you... The chapter was very good, especially the genjutsu thing..didn't see that one coming. Looking forward to more :D
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah nice, second chapter. Just as good as the first one. I really like where this is going. I would prefer a longer story and I am sure you can write it. But you are the artist, its your decision. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS AWESOME . . . well all your stories are awesome. . . your suigetsu one is incredible the piranha one lol I loved it. Your characters are some awesomely role played. Its like the perfect personality for each character. Do you write your own stuff as well? Not just fan fiction? I can't believe English isn't your first language... anyway i hope you upgrade soon. I wanna know how you do a kakashi and sasuke one. I am so excited the way you left it is actually something i could see saskue saying to kakashi. YAY!!!!
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it especially because its very new, i mean Kakashi hurting/dying was only in the manga last week. Its nice to see something fresch and that karin, yuugo and suigetsi are involved in the story you don't see that often...:)
I'm looking forward too the new chapter, particulary because there is no manga chapter this week :(
I'm looking forward too the new chapter, particulary because there is no manga chapter this week :(