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for you belong to me

by sameyler

schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They didn't ask for the badge or photo did they?
Do you HAVE to give them everything that they asked for?
and I'm sorry for you loss. It sounds like you were very close.
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's so sad. Sorry about the turmoil in your family. They sound like vultures. =_= I feel for you. The previous chappie was really good. My heart goes out to you and I'll just wait patiently for your update. ^_^
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hee hee another good chappie!!!! and an uke on top huh? kinky!! :)
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that's pretty pathetic you know, and truly sad! a person you care about is dead and these vultures have the nerve to fight over some petty items?!! if i were you i would donate some of your grandmothers' belongings to charity and keep the most impotant things like photos or memorable items to yourself let the greedy bastards suffer it just shows who they truly are and care nothing for this person who has taken careed and loved you all these years. "ugh...that pisses me off!"
person mls1971
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story!!!!!!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person a kitsunes light
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!I really liked this chapter too! And sasuke is quite confusing.
Anyways, I really wanna see how naruto gets the whole family back together! And how they somehow embarass him, and if possible Madara too, ahah a Madara embarased would be hilarious!
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was good. You had a few spelling mistakes but it was alright. I'd like to see you write more on this, at least another chapter to sort of tie up all the loose ends and stuff. And cold is a great author(ess), I like his/her stories as well. Good job!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That cute and funny! It's nice to see more of those two together, I hope you write more :D
person a kitsunes light
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay! I cant wait to read more! I really liked it! I think they got inlove quickly butthat isn't bad, and I really liked this cute love story!
eheh I can't wait for them to meet the bride!!!!
person Becky
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like this story even though I have no idea what madara looks like! Can't wait for another chapter!!!!! Hope its soon!!!!