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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved i wish you could update soon!!
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I Love This! Plz Continue! I Gotta see how SasUKE is gonna try n get outa this!
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January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you're welcome. lol i wonder if naru did recognize sas. this will be interesting
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a total tease. Looking forward to more.
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested to read more. :D
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's good, good, keep it up ;) i'd like another chapter asap... and i didn't find any mistakes... but maybe it's because English ain't my mother language
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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Just when it started to get exciting!
Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol. this sounds really funny and good. you should totally continue it. the only grammar mistake i saw was at the end where sasuke thought naruto would "tore the place down" the way it's written it should be "tear the place down." other than that it was fine. pretty damn good i'd say for someone who's native tongue isn't english especially since there are plenty of writers who's native language is english and they have poor grammar :)