rate_review Reviews

Beautiful. Truly beautiful.

I cried.

this is one of those rare works of fanfiction that just drives you crazy. this was fantastically written and beautifully composed. i love the idea of the story, the way that naruto and sasuke have to come together in the story for one final, last moment of truth. i love that they naruto is so dedicated to sasuke, that even with so much against them, when he has no reason to even come and see sasuke, he does. i love the dedication they have between each other here. it's fantastic and believable and beautiful. and how painful this story reads. it's so sad. the ending is so wonderfully wrought. it reminds me of nothing i've ever read before, and that's a huge accomplishment.

i really like the pov you used in this. its a fascinating way to write it, and it's incredibly well done. good job making the pov solid throughout the story. that's something that's hard to do and you did an amazing job with it. i like it, i think it added that much more emotion to this story. it made it that much more personal, to be written so that we, the readers, are sasuke. a fascinating and beautiful take on the story. i love the story.

i hope more people read it.

Sad, but true. Beautiful and harsh. Wonderful job.

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WOW!!!! I have never felt so much emotions all at once from reading a story. This was absolutly beautiful and breath taking
Great Job!!!! You are an amazing writer keep it up