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October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! what a story! the kind that you can't forget easily
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME story! I've always wondered...is Naruto so sadistic, malicious, and malevolent in this story just because of his fusing with Kyuubi, or did Kyuubi only bring out the malice already in him? And Naruto is HORRIBLE here, a BASTARD beyond words. The way he treats Kakashi and Nagato is APPALLING, inhumane, cruel and disgusting. And Kakashi thought that Naruto loved him...It's amazing how you can portray the same character in so many different ways, and all of those ways seem acceptable and reasonable. You really have writing talent.
Is there going to be a sequel? Hopefully. xD
Is there going to be a sequel? Hopefully. xD
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! will nagato ever have eyes again?
ASOTA
ASOTA
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's over?sigh!thanks for this wonderful fic,I really loved it!I wish more people would write so dark,hot,angsty,amazing!
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It was so good! I think it was well written. The end was a little bit to quick to my liking, but it was good too. Thank you write again a very good story like this!
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a difficult tale to read at times, and I'm sure it was hard to write, but I think you succeeded in creating fascinating scenario that was far more than just gratuitous violence. I like how Kakashi recovered his sense of self at the end, and while I was sad for Naruto, it was good to see that Gaara would be there for him.
This was really well done!
This was really well done!
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought you ended this story beautifully! You didn't rush or cheat the characters or the plot. Bravo! I also believe you are being too hard on yourself. Some authors take months and months to update a story. And while I understand that writing is a difficult process, it took alot of creativity and tenacity for you to complete something this well orchestrated and thought out. That is something that I rarely ever see accomplished on this or any other fanfic site. You should be patting yourself on the back, especially since you said you have the tendency to lose interest and walk away from these kinds of things. I look foward to seeing more of your work and I'm still not going to give up on hoping that you will one day be able to complete the Pein/Jiraiya story either.(hee)
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January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAWWWW! That was short but very touching. I hope Naruto doesn't hurt Kakashi too badly. I'm really worried for both of them. I love this story, please keep up the great work!
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i don't want them mad at each other...
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god! Poor Nagato! I'm just wondering, but does Naruto use Kakashi anymore since Nagato showed up? I loved this update, it really showed alot of introspection for Kakashi. Thanks again!