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Well, I didn't see that coming, did you? I wasn't expecting Naruto to take Pein to his home. What an interesting development. Can't wait till next time. So good!

I was almost afraid that Naruto was hidden in the shadows somewhere watching...Thanks for the update. As always, this story just blows me away!

I really love this story so far but the direction you're headed makes me a bit uneasy. Lol.
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I read this all at once. I just started getting into the series and I must say I love this story so far. I want to cry for poor Kakashi. Well I hope you update soon. I got to say this, you should have Sasuke suddenly come back and steal him from Naruto, or someone, as long as they are cute. Not Gaara cause he's reserved for me only MWHAHAHAHA!!!! Keep up the splendid work!

not likin' Naruto at allllll

I think i'm getting a little uneasy about this story, maybe I don't like Naruto in such a role, at first I thought..Yahhh!!Dominating N, submissive K...tradgedy..sex...BDSM....sexy,sexy combo...but now not so sexy..kinda mean and a little horrible...I'm not liking N too much now.

I like but I'm also rather scared o_O

I thought I would die when I read Naruto's line, "You are such a filthy slut, aren't you." I'm such a sucker for dirty talk. Thanks for the BRILLIANT update once again! This story has no parallel. And thanks so much for your response to my question. It means alot that you might consider working on that story later. I humbly and eagerly await the next update to this fic...can't wait!

oh poor poor kakashi !but you're the best!

Yes, I would hope that everyone realizes that this relationship of Naruto's and Kakashi's is unhealthy...but it's sort of like an accident, you can't help but crane your neck to look out of morbid fascination. I do believe that Kakashi will find love, but I decided to no longer try to speculate what will happen in the future because your story is such an original one there is no way to guess what is going to happen next and sometimes on this website that is a rare thing indeed! Keep up the great work and before I go, I was wondering if you were planning on finishing "The Fallen"? I would love to see that story finished to if at all possible. It's as original in plot as this one...I think it would be great to read! Thanks!